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    Sam Brabender

    1 month, 1 week ago

    Hi everyone
    Unfortunately missed the call live but had a go at doing the commitment e mail. Would love any feedback- thanks in advance

    Subject: I am committed…

    Hi …..

    I am committed to a holistic and positive approach to skincare and self care. As midlife women entering a new chapter in life, I believe its our time to shine. This is about reclaiming time for ourselves, nurturing our spirit and celebrating the wisdom and beauty that comes with age.

    What if each time you applied your night cream, you thought of what you were grateful for that day?

    How good would it feel as you fall asleep at night, to have your mind full of gratitude and your skin nourished?

    Instead of worrying about aging skin, you could relax knowing your night cream has an exclusive molecule that slows down collagen loss as well as a plant based retinol.

    Instead of focusing on the aging process, you focus on being thankful for another day and opportunity to enjoy life.

    So how about you let Neora products take care of your skin, and you focus on feeling good inside, radiating positivity and confidence. That way you glow both inside and out.

    My joy is helping my customers to focus on whats really important to them like happiness, vitality and feeling good. Let me deal with the logistics of getting the right skincare products into your bathroom.

    As a customer of mine, you will:
    • Have the products you need delivered to you when you want them
    • With a text or email, be able to change or cancel orders
    • Know you are paying the lowest price available
    • Have me as your cheerleader and support

    Check out my website: sambrabender.neora.com

    But dont order yet!

    Let me know what peaks your curiosity and we can set up a call to answer your questions and help you start to glow with renewed confidence!

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    • Hi @sambrabendergmail-com I was following your email pretty well until I got to your CTA. I’m confused why you would send them to your website but then ask them not to order but to reply to your email. This might be too many actions or confuse your readers about what you actually want them to do-visit your website or reply to your email.

    • I wonder if the section as a customer of mine could answer the questions you posed above. Like you go to bed feeling your skin is being nourished is the question.Then in the customer section-you can rest easy knowing that the hard work of rounding up the best ingredients for your night cream has been done. I love the grateful comments but they don’t mesh into how the products will make them grateful.

      • Kathy, good job pulling it back together and keeping things connected. Sam, I think this is a great suggestion

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