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Any feed back would be great- is it compelling? CTA in line with the content? More or Less “story”?
Email # 2
Subject line: She stood in the storm
And when the wind did not blow her away she adjusted her sailsGosh let me tell you when I picked up a camera again after not touching one for 20 years was it different! No film, lots of…Read More
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Great work this week, everyone! For those of you who are ready to promote your lead magnet more to grow your list after completing the experiment that we set for you this week… Here are my top 3 themes that you can watch the 1st session and come here to post your draft messaging and get feedback from your community. Remember, when you post here…Read More
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Hi! I finally have my Lead Converstion Tool finished – Get To The Vet With Less Stress – and I”d love feedback. Video is my content personality so I included video. Here is the link:
My target audience are Pet Moms (and Dads are welcome, my focus is just usually Moms because the energy is often…Read More
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This is so clear and such a focused pain point. Good clarity, Blair
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Thank you!
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HI All- I am so excited to be a part of the group. I found that peer reviews, suggestions and input can be priceless.
Here is what I have come up with after listening to last weeks lesson and being a part of today’s.Please comment on my email tag line is it compelling you to open the email?
Does the story resonate and have impact?
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Really like the subject line, often we shy away from pain. And the story is wonderful. The line that the photo shoot was her reset point really resonated with me. For the first line of the email, perhaps look at how to make the first sentence more about the emotion than the fact that you had a meeting. Shooting in the dark but something like I was…Read More
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thanks!
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Can you tie this back to the story? These questions are all very vague (but I do want to say… a good start) I know you can bring this together.
What would you want your photo shoot to include? Is there a theme you like? An outfit that is the bomb? A fantasy look that you want to explore? Reply to this email and share with me. I love to hear and…Read More-
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Thank you! Will work on it some more 🙂
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Your subject line would get me to open your email!
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Thanks!
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So great to be with you all today – great interactions and love the feedback and support
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Email Number 4- Does this email speak to those looking to change their health and is it clear that if they sign up for the Masterclass they will have the answers to better health? @amymshannonhernandez-com @clientsmshannonhernandez-com
Subject Line: Do Holidays mean Overeating?
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I think that it is somewhat clear on what the masterclass covers. You might consider taking out the second to last paragraph ( Are you clear….) Clear is used quite a bit at the end of the email you may want to use some other words.
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Thank you! Good point, clear is there a lot, I’ll edit that part 🙂
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Hi @jaini-shah15gmail-com – love this take on holidays and over eating. Can you include in the last paragraph a bulleted list of the 3 takeaways from the workshop?
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Email Number 3- if you read this email, would you want to know more about what food to eat and avoid? Hoping to get some discovery calls booked! @amymshannonhernandez-com @clientsmshannonhernandez-com
Subject Line: Does it rot?
Preview: How do you know if food is real?Hook Line: Something weird happened, I bought a croissant and decided…Read More
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Don’t add fluff to the hook line
Hook Line: Something weird happened, I bought a croissant and decided not to eat it, and then A YEAR LATER- the croissant is still here 😷😷Get straight to it: I bought a croissant and decided not to eat it, and then A YEAR LATER- the croissant is still here
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agreed! less words = more clarity (in cases like this)
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Thanks for this inspiration, Amy! I am going to use what clients do wrong, because I mention that in my lead magnet and it also addresses how NOT to do that!