• Following yesterday’s call here’s a draft of the email I’d like to send out. Let me know if it’s catchy and if you get the point?

    Subject line: Don’t Invite the Holiday Weight
    Preview: Have fun on holiday!

    Hook: Say goodbye to the holiday weight – or just don’t invite it in the first place!
    Sound too good to be true?

    Here’s the thing,…Read More

  • Hi everyone. Post our call today, I made a video newsletter and added a bit of text to it to give people context. It actually felt so good and easy to just drop this as a video. I think in this way people really get to experience me as a teacher and coach which gives them a preview into what it’s like to work with me.

    Email title: Are you too…Read More

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  • Are we going to get a template from Wednesday? I know you all are out of the country with not great internet –

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  • Hi everyone. Ok here is email #1 I wrote per yesterday’s training.
    Is the email enticing and does it make you want to get support to take the next big leap in your life or business? Does it touch directly enough to pain points? And do you think it would convert?

    Subject line: Is trusting your intuition reckless?
    Hook: What to do when your…Read More

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  • Happy Friday! Make sure you are posting and reading other’s drafts. Ask questions for clarification or if you are seeing a gap, share how the words made you feel and keep on supporting each other 💜

    Please don’t tag Shannon or me in your draft posts, it makes others feel like they can not comment.

    Remember, this is a community forum and it is…Read More

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    • Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com just posted mine 😉 Just to clarify and better understand, we will also get feedback from you and Shannon? Thanks for clarifying. Trying to understand the flow of all the things in here 😎

      • We try to get to as many as we can, but know we can’t always get to every single post. That 1:1 support for each and every piece of messaging is what we can do when you are able to upgrade to Joyfueled Bussiness 🙂

  • NURTURE SEQUENCE- EMAIL 1

    Would love some feedback here please, is the email too wordy? Am I direct enough as to who I’m talking to and what I believe? Note I am using this as a welcome sequence for those who join my list through my landing page/link in bio form.

    Subject: FirstNAME, Nice to meet you!
    Preview: [Lets Get Healthy]

    Hello…Read More

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    • individuals in your BIG mission section falls flat. It seems not like you and is cold. Look at your bold qualifiers… what else can you use there?

      • Thanks Amy. What are bold qualifiers? Here’s a re-work of the Big Mission: “My BIG mission is to help tired individuals change their mindset and food habits so that they can wake up feeling fresh, have the energy to do all the things they love, go on adventures with ease and just feel light, energetic and happy in their body. “

    • Hi @jaini-shah15gmail-com Here are some thoughts.

      This empowering statement would have kep me reading if it were at the beginning: My BIG mission is to help individuals who are seeking more energy to do the things they love, want to break through any fears or mental blocks that are holding them back to take a stand for their health, master their…Read More

      • Thanks Jen! That helps. I was following the format in the Nurture Sequence training that’s why the Big Mission is where it is in the email 🙈 But totally get what you’re saying. Also need to refine the pain points and the ideal outcome.

  • QUESTION- Can the May 2024 Lead Magnet Nurture sequence also work for creating my general nurture sequence? So when people sign up to my email list from my link in bio form can I use this Nurture Sequence as a template?
    Also is there something I can watch to help with my messaging on my link in bio form/landing page?

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    • Related to this would you suggest that as I create my new welcome sequence, I add those are already on my list (and may have gone through my old sequence) to the new sequence to run through it? @amymshannonhernandez-com?

    • May 2024 nurture sequence is totally the one to use as a guide

    • Did you watch landing page copy in the Direct Offer Content? It isn’t going to be exactly what you are asking for (bio is coming up though) but I think it will help.

      • Thanks! I’ll add this to my list to watch. In relation to my email list- would you suggest that as I create my new welcome sequence, I add those who are already on my list (and may have gone through my old sequence) to the new sequence to run through it?

  • First draft of my Sales Page Copy for my sales call invitation (where I would then sell my coaching. This is my coaching offer:

    The Intuitive Incubator

    Sales Page Copy ⤵️

    PULL STATEMENT:

    Stop letting your YESes die inside of you!
    Own the life you truly desire and start taking imperfect action to create…Read More

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    • Just curious- what do you mean by stop letting your Yeses die inside of you? I’m trying to see what the pull statement is for. Because that left me confused not knowing what it means.

  • NEW DRAFT for my I help statement @amymshannonhernandez-com

    I just had a big insight tonight. In the last few months it’s become clear that I attract Highly Sensitive Empaths and creatives (like me) and when I did the exercise for the Bold Qualifier, my past clients were mostly all Empaths.

    Then tonight, I was journaling in The Desire Map w…Read More

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    • This: ➡ I help empaths find the courage to trust their intuition and design the life that will give them the freedom they need to feel fulfilled and safe in the world through entrepreneurship.

  • Did you all see @diana-lidstonegmail-com‘s post? She expanded a little on our theme for the month of Industry BS. Congrats for stoping the scroll!
    https://www.facebook.com/diana.lidstone/posts/pfbid02PWQJ8X14trWtFJRfyTMM2oaZ211NheBfM89gwBatfDCoFk6Tmv8jjUhhKTXfoWyyl

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