-
Following yesterday’s call here’s a draft of the email I’d like to send out. Let me know if it’s catchy and if you get the point?
Subject line: Don’t Invite the Holiday Weight
Preview: Have fun on holiday!Hook: Say goodbye to the holiday weight – or just don’t invite it in the first place!
Sound too good to be true?Here’s the thing,…Read More
-
Hi everyone. Post our call today, I made a video newsletter and added a bit of text to it to give people context. It actually felt so good and easy to just drop this as a video. I think in this way people really get to experience me as a teacher and coach which gives them a preview into what it’s like to work with me.
Email title: Are you too…Read More
-
Are we going to get a template from Wednesday? I know you all are out of the country with not great internet –
-
Hi everyone. Ok here is email #1 I wrote per yesterday’s training.
Is the email enticing and does it make you want to get support to take the next big leap in your life or business? Does it touch directly enough to pain points? And do you think it would convert?Subject line: Is trusting your intuition reckless?
Hook: What to do when your…Read More4 Comments-
-
Thanks @lisajohnsvagmail-com 🙂 I know I always have so much to say lol. I’ll work on tightning up my emails a bit!!
-
this should be in the download, not this email. You are trying to do too much in 1 single email.
I suggest doing the meditation first to unleash your intuition and then dive into the journal questions. Set aside an hour and offer yourself a Say Yes retreat at home with a nice cup of tea or coffee and let yourself dream a little. Do the meditation…Read More-
Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com. Good idea to put it with the dowload. Was my email pretty enticing and clear? Or does the email in general have too much information?
-
-
-
-
-
Happy Friday! Make sure you are posting and reading other’s drafts. Ask questions for clarification or if you are seeing a gap, share how the words made you feel and keep on supporting each other
Please don’t tag Shannon or me in your draft posts, it makes others feel like they can not comment.
Remember, this is a community forum and it is…Read More
-
Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com just posted mine 😉 Just to clarify and better understand, we will also get feedback from you and Shannon? Thanks for clarifying. Trying to understand the flow of all the things in here 😎
-
-
NURTURE SEQUENCE- EMAIL 1
Would love some feedback here please, is the email too wordy? Am I direct enough as to who I’m talking to and what I believe? Note I am using this as a welcome sequence for those who join my list through my landing page/link in bio form.
Subject: FirstNAME, Nice to meet you!
Preview: [Lets Get Healthy]Hello…Read More
-
individuals in your BIG mission section falls flat. It seems not like you and is cold. Look at your bold qualifiers… what else can you use there?
-
Thanks Amy. What are bold qualifiers? Here’s a re-work of the Big Mission: “My BIG mission is to help tired individuals change their mindset and food habits so that they can wake up feeling fresh, have the energy to do all the things they love, go on adventures with ease and just feel light, energetic and happy in their body. “
-
-
Hi @jaini-shah15gmail-com Here are some thoughts.
This empowering statement would have kep me reading if it were at the beginning: My BIG mission is to help individuals who are seeking more energy to do the things they love, want to break through any fears or mental blocks that are holding them back to take a stand for their health, master their…Read More
-
-
QUESTION- Can the May 2024 Lead Magnet Nurture sequence also work for creating my general nurture sequence? So when people sign up to my email list from my link in bio form can I use this Nurture Sequence as a template?
Also is there something I can watch to help with my messaging on my link in bio form/landing page?4 Comments-
Related to this would you suggest that as I create my new welcome sequence, I add those are already on my list (and may have gone through my old sequence) to the new sequence to run through it? @amymshannonhernandez-com?
-
Did you watch landing page copy in the Direct Offer Content? It isn’t going to be exactly what you are asking for (bio is coming up though) but I think it will help.
-
-
First draft of my Sales Page Copy for my sales call invitation (where I would then sell my coaching. This is my coaching offer:
Sales Page Copy
PULL STATEMENT:
Stop letting your YESes die inside of you!
Own the life you truly desire and start taking imperfect action to create…Read More -
NEW DRAFT for my I help statement @amymshannonhernandez-com
I just had a big insight tonight. In the last few months it’s become clear that I attract Highly Sensitive Empaths and creatives (like me) and when I did the exercise for the Bold Qualifier, my past clients were mostly all Empaths.
Then tonight, I was journaling in The Desire Map w…Read More
1 Comment -
Did you all see @diana-lidstonegmail-com‘s post? She expanded a little on our theme for the month of Industry BS. Congrats for stoping the scroll!
https://www.facebook.com/diana.lidstone/posts/pfbid02PWQJ8X14trWtFJRfyTMM2oaZ211NheBfM89gwBatfDCoFk6Tmv8jjUhhKTXfoWyyl-
Halleluja to all the Industry BS. Love the post @diana-lidstonegmail-com and I see it’s getting a ton of engagement!
-
Thanks @jenniferjenniferjaneyoung-com — And yes it’s getting engagement; making $$$; and generating leads! Cheers
-
-
Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com for the shout out! YUP it’s working. It all started with a talk I’m doing Nov 4 – Stop Wasting Money on Marketing and has now turned into a whole sequence leading ultimately to a bootcamp then an evergreen course!!
-
- Load More Posts
Really enjoyed the video and felt your message come through so well.