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Jaini Shah changed their profile picture

• 6 months, 3 weeks ago

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Blair Hope

• 6 months, 3 weeks ago

Here is my draft. I decided to start over because I want to get my Calm & Pets: Storm and Fireworks program out for 4th of July /summer. Some of this was bolded and I can’t figure out how to make it bold here.

I’d love feedback. It may be too long. Thanks!

Hook: Is your pet afraid of storms or fireworks?

It’s summer… that time of yea…Read More

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- Dan Lewis
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Hi, Blair! I like the flow of your piece very much, especially how you note the FEELING of helplessness when your pet is afraid.
  The flow is great, but feels like it could be tightened up a bit. (perhaps consolidate the What I discovered and what I figured out sections?
  Great work!
  - Blair Hope
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks Dan for your feedback!
- AmyHager
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  This might be giving away a little too much. Is there anything you feel you can pull back on in V2 that will give them clarity that they need your help?
  
  One suggestion is to replace this phrase: So I created a technique that anyone can quickly
  With: I teach pet parents (or owners – how ever they are identifying when you speak to them) how to…Read More
  - Blair Hope
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks, I am cutting a lot and changing that language. Good idea!
Jaini Shah

• 6 months, 3 weeks ago

Hi Everyone! I’m Jaini, just joined the club. Excited to be here and really get clear on my messaging and start taking action on all the things I’ve started but not finished. And this time with the best messaging possible 😊😊
I’m a health enthusiast and became a food relationship coach and Rapid Transformational Therapist after going through my…Read More

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- Dan Lewis
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Hi, Jaini! Welcome! Thanks for sharing your story and your interests!
  - Jaini Shah
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks Dan! Looking forward to connecting!
AmyHager

• 6 months, 3 weeks ago

Share your content! If you have used your content on your social media, share it so we can see and support you! ❤️
SamirSelmanovic

• 7 months ago

Where can I find last Wednesday’s CPC recording and, more importantly, the What’s New master template that was presented? Thank you

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- AmyHager
  7 months ago
  
  Always go to the month you are looking for and the recordings will be there, usually within 24-48 hrs after the session. https://contentpersonalityclub.com/courses/june-2024/
  - SamirSelmanovic
    7 months ago
    
    Thank you @amymshannonhernandez-com. Where do I get google doc I can copy from that day. I only see pdf there, thanks.
    - AmyHager
      6 months, 3 weeks ago
      
      google doc is in the starter kit
SamirSelmanovic

• 7 months ago

Finally!!! Here’s my lead magnet, with 4 follow-up emails, and the offer. I’m nervous, after lots of work, and any feedback would be gold.
http://www.mysticpowersreview.com

Also, I am thinking of renaming it into Mystic Quiz. It’s more direct, more playful, and more clear. Mystic Powers Review is a mouthful, and I think it will have a harder time…Read More

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- Shannon
  7 months ago
  
  @samirselmanovicnycgmail-com hello! I will be diving deep into this with you once you get onboarded in our other program – but for now, I’m thinking the quiz needs to be: Modern Mystic Quiz. I like this a lot – and it’s better than “review”. Thoughts?
  - SamirSelmanovic
    7 months ago
    
    Love it! Also, I was thinking Mystic Leadership Quiz. The one you suggest is for more broad audience, more playful. While MLQ would identify who is this for in terms of my level 5 client, but not that playful and energizing like MMQ.
  - Dan Lewis
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Oooh, I like the dynamic justaposition of Modern Mystic!
SaraFins

• 7 months, 1 week ago

Hello! Here is my first stab at a ‘what’s new’ email. My CTA is to download my guide. I’d love any feedback. Is it clear? Compelling? Make sense? Thanks!

Email 1:
Is the fact that you feel like you aren’t good with numbers holding you back from getting your business finances in order?

If so, here is what you can do about it:

I’m see…Read More

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- AmyHager
  7 months ago
  
  Not a numbers person can be one of the answers on your new quiz lead magnet.
- AmyHager
  7 months ago
  
  How can you touch more into the emotion? This line could be different: This holds them back from growing the revenue in their business and keeps their stress levels high.
SamirSelmanovic changed their profile picture

• 7 months, 1 week ago

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SamirSelmanovic

• 7 months, 1 week ago

Re: Looking for a marketing tool

Hello everyone (still working on uploading the profile pic),

I have identified 5 of my super-ideal recent clients who got a lot from my coaching, more than they ever hoped for, and were utter joys to work with. I’d like to know what worked, why me, how, everything so I can use it to align my marketing with…Read More

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- SaraFins
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  I believe there is a ‘template’ for getting testimonials somewhere in the past lessons. I think this would help you get the information you are looking for. Maybe search around and see if you can find it. Or maybe Shannon or Amy can point you in the right direction.
  - SamirSelmanovic
    7 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thank you Sara! It’s not about the testimonials though. Something strange is happening, actually. These begin as run of the mill leadership/executive coaching, helping them with leadership competencies. Then three sessions into it, the whole relationship goes into some form of flow/trance that allows people to blossom, grow, cross thresholds. So,…Read More
    - Shannon
      7 months ago
      
      @samirselmanovicnycgmail-com I am adding this to our onboard list to follow up on when we speak. Yay! hang tight…”shannonesque” may be my new favorite word.
      
      SamirSelmanovic
      7 months ago
      
      You are totally different non-bullshiter than all other non-bullshiters out there. And totally different joy-addict than other joy-addicts, a category of your own. There’s definitely Shanonesque thing going on here. 🙂
DianaLidstone

• 7 months, 2 weeks ago

Would you rather take a Business Self-Assessment or a Business Freedom Audit? (my lead magnet) FYI – I help Chief Everything Officers stop getting stuck in the day to day running of their business and step into their true role of Visionary CEO so they can build a self-running biz engine.

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- Anthea Mumby
  7 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  If I think back to my earlier days, freedom for sure!
- ChristineDainard
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  I don’t love the word audit – it has a negative connotation for me, so I prefer the first option.
- SamirSelmanovic
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Freedom is more powerful for me
- SaraFins
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  I also like the word freedom. Business Self-Assessment seems vague to me. I”m not sure what the purpose of that assessment would be (from the title).
- Shannon
  7 months ago
  
  Freedom for me!
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