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Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to greet y’all. Im a behind on responding! Let me know If I can ever be. helpful

Photo that goes with copy.

I like how you call your discovery call a “possibility consultation.” To me, this gives your process a high-touch, high-end feel. You could almost create a 3-part series that goes over the Naming, Framing, and Playing.

I LOVE everything about this!!!! Where do you live? I want this service! Class Act!

Dan – love the topic. Your subject lines need to be 3-5 words max. 🙂 Consider: Why you need visual charisma. Or Do you have visual charisma?

I wish I knew copy better to help you – let me sit with this

Love this, Ann!
Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?

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I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]

She summed i…Read More

Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?

Hey Carrie! One thing I’m curious about is the nature of the decisions she was making that contibuted to her stress? Is it possible to capture how you help impact decisioning making?

Hi Anthea! I am not sure if we are able to shift followers from our LI newsletter to one sent from our own CRM. I suppose you could do an email scrape and manually pull their emails from LI, but adding them to your own CRM without them opting in is a bit sketchy since they didn’t agree to be added to your list. BUT you could add a link to optin to…Read More

LI not my fav. sorry. As for a welcome series Im happy to share mine BUT its very tailored to me and my voice.. interested?

@antheadreamteamconsulting-ca – hi! Lead people from your LI NL to your email list with an optin, workshop, lead magnet, etc. Let them help each other!

First, I LOVE your sign-off! After reading your email, I’m still not sure what you do/are offering. What type of coaching is this? I would want to assume life coaching, but you know what assuming can lead to (ass/u/me). You state that you founded your business to be a resource, but that feels vague to me. Format-wise, it looks good, but I would…Read More

WHOA. Effervescently….LOVE I’m a bit confused. partly b/c I have the attention span of an ant. I felt for me it was too much. Hope this is helpful. xo

@thia-h-piersongmail-com – great suggestions above. I agree that I’m not clear on what the offer is. So spend some time spelling that out step by step for yourself – so you can talk about it with authority and specificity. Also, please remember to make your text blocks “less dense”. People are reading emails from phones – and therefore (to my…Read More