• Nitty Gritty Refocused! Would love feedback!

    TO PARENTS WHO WANT THEIR TEENS TO LEARN REAL-WORLD SKILLS SO THEY ARE READY FOR LIFE OUTSIDE THE CLASSROOM:

    Would your teens benefit from:
    – Building a positive self-image?
    – Effective communication skills?
    – Strategies to develop resilience?
    – Managing his/her emotions?
    – Methods to set…Read More

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    • You have already shared this, correct?

    • What part specifically would you like feedback on?

    • I’m not sure if this is something you talk about in your work, but what about a result of your teens becoming more independent? For example – managing their own homework, courseload, schedule etc. Maybe that falls under resilience, but I know many parents who feel like they can’t get their teen to take ownership of things. On another note – I am…Read More

  • Direct Offer Post–would love feedback! Is it too long? Does it make sense or did I get too wordy? Thanks all!

    3 spots left in the new redesigned Imagine Social Group! Is one of them for your child?
    Many parents of young children delay seeking outside social skills support for their child for a couple of reasons –
    -valid reasons too!
    1-…Read More

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    • one question. do your parents say they want help with their parenting skills? If not, rework this line:
      It’s okay, take a breath- I’m here to help you calm your nerves, boost your confidence as a parent, all while helping your child get on the right track to more positive social thinking skills in 4 weeks.

    • Many parents of young children delay seeking outside social skills support for their child for a couple of reasons –
      -valid reasons too! how about for valid reasons.

    • I love the picture you painted. Great job! My question is – what age children is the group for? Elementary? Teens? I can tell it’s for younger children but maybe specifying age will help people to self identify with it more.

  • Direct Offer Content:

    Does your tech and systems look a little bit like this? A little bit of a CRM stuck to your online learning platform. And then we toss in a few spreadsheets, an e-commerce storefront with a project management system. Don’t forget your website too!

    And somehow, they all have to play nice together and run your b…Read More

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    • I like this because in your testimony she says ‘in a few months’ which gives people realistic expectations. Great testimony also because she highlights at the end that she has systems that run without her constantly monitoring and speaks to your offer to streamline systems and build better workflows. Nice job!

    • where did you find the toy photo? that is so freaking perfect!

    • with that testimonial, you don’t have to use it all. Here is how I would rework it to fit this offer and not confuse your reader. AND I have a question – will you be the one traking KPIs, tasks, etc with this offer? If not… ditch this and start with Together “Today, she tracks KPIs, ensures all tasks are completed by my team, has a list of…Read More

      • @amymshannonhernandez-com So that’s a little tricky. I have released that client and no longer work with her. I’m not sure if I can/should reword that testimonial to read in the past tense.

        • yes you should. It doesn’t have to be word-for-word exact. And, you don’t have to keep everything because it no longer relates to the work you do.
          My question for you (and everyone else reading/thinking this) is this testimony actually saying what you need it to say and does it make sense? Right now, Carrie, as written – it is confusing and takes…Read More

          • I don’t handle the implementation and ongoing maintenance/retainer work. I provide them with the audit blueprint and make recommendations for what needs to be restructured and changed. I can manage the change over, but don’t implement.

    • I love how you painted the picture at the beginning. I could totally see it!

  • Nitty Gritty details
    Already seeing some ways I can strengthen this piece – like your photos may be costing you clients, more focus on using photos to BUILD RELATIONSHIP, which leads to clients.Thoughts?

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    Three tips to using location to create standout personal brand images that position you as an authority

    Ever go to a coach’s…Read More

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    • I like the content; it’s incredibly valuable and is things that I have never considered before with positioning my photos. My question is, where or how are you going to use this content? For me, it reads like a blog or an article. It feels a skootch too long for a single social media post, but I could definitely see it as a series of posts by…Read More

    • You really like this theme! Here is my challenge for you. How can you use your Live/In-person content personality more?

  • Why I haven’t posted here, Yet…. I’m struggling with my cognitive organization – and breaking this style of writing down -I am habitually a “FREE writer,” and so putting pieces together has been short-circuiting my neurodivergent brain. I’m being slow and compassionate with this… and have a notebook full of journal and writing from each of…Read More

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    • Always keep flowing with what has worked.
      Can you plug any of the pieces from any of the frameworks into something that has worked to shine more light?

  • If you have missed Inspired Beyond Belief – I had Shannon stream my favorite part into the FB Group. You all need to watch it. Please share your Do | Be | Have goals in the comments of that video.
    https://www.facebook.com/maryshannon.hernandez/videos/746727367319076?idorvanity=1545554722411966

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  • ok – so I finally went for it and created an Instagram post for nitty gritty – and the video seems long – good lesson – how to be catchy to the point and shorter!
    Let’s see what engagement is like… still not sure I actually captured the essence of the assignment but let’s see…
    thanks for all and any…Read More

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    • I love the way you explained that it’s the connection between the partners is more important than memorizing the steps. When the connection is there and you are listening to their movements, the steps will come. Fabulous!

    • Will you re-post this video now that you have practiced and can you add a little more detail of the feeling/emotion that creates that connection between partners?

  • Just a reminder, we meet Jan 2nd at 10am ET for Inspired Beyond Belief. The zoom is in your calendars.
    Inspirational Journal. can be downloaded here: https://joyfulbusinessrevolution.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/12/2024-Inspiration-Journal.pdf

  • Hi All! Looking for feedback on my recent post. I teach mindfulness to school-age kids and stress reduction to teachers. Often, people put my work in the category of yoga, so I took this nitty-gritty detail and wrote a post on it today for LinkedIn. Any feedback will be helpful. Thanks!

    Why Mindfulness is yoga and how it’s…Read More

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    • Love this! So glad you dove into this since this was the feedback you had been given about “doing yoga already.” Also – I would like you to use the word teach instead of present. Do you know why?

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