Can you get back into the link through your calendar?

we reviewed this on the connect call and I used my good feedback there 🙂

Go simple. Tripping over shoes at the door and Managing the bazillion papers but you can’t find the ONE you need.
Complete the next steps and let’s see what you got 💜

Subject: Are you tripping as you try to get out your door?

Is a clear path to and from your door a dream?

…it may be because shoes pile up along with backpacks, sports equipment, and work bags.

There are 2 reasons this continues to happen:
1) Everyone needs “quick out the door” items handy and their closets are already full.
2) No one has…Read More

I think the problem you solve for is that an organized home gives people a more peaceful container to create from. An organized home allows us to rest when we are home and that helps us function better when we are not. An organized home helps us feel joy in our surroundings and this is better than the chaos which can drain us in a disorganized home

Interesting! The problems I feel with a disorganised space- feel my mind is cluttered and can’t work properly, always feel like I’m busy when the space is disorganised, don’t know how I would even start to organise so I can feel better.
On your draft email, the first sentence and the second line don’t seem to connect. The dream is great, but how…Read More

can you make this line a little clearer? * You believe who you were is who you are, discounting your very real lived experiences.

Can you say this in a way your clients are saying it. I don’t know that they would say “I am using someone else framework and it isn’t working” * You’re outsourcing your wisdom to someone else’s framework.

I am pushing you here… working 24/7, hustling on weekends & evenings and yet despite being overworked, you still feel broke – does not bridge over well to #2: Your marketing and content doesn’t position your solution as the BEST solution for your audience.

I know you have better ones to choose from that will speak to the overworked/under p…Read More

Love Email 2 and 4! For Email 3 I feel like there are 2 opening sentences. Maybe just pick one sentence and focus on what their want is which they don’t have. Like “If you’re not feeling like you know exactly what to do and all your juggling balls are in a line, it may because you’re spending too much time on non-revenue generating activities”.…Read More

Bummed I missed this, I was at another event. But looking forward to watching the replay.

Is there one saying that someone says to you more than the other?
1. I don’t know how much it actually costs me to create my product/service
2.I have no idea how much my business is costing me.

These look great to me

Both emails sound great! Clear problem and reasons.

I see what you want to do here… but I don’t think anyone calls themselves “Tired One”
Change: If you’re ready to go from the Tired One to the Energised Human, then it’s time to schedule a Discovery Call with me.
to: If you’re ready to go from being tired all the time and feeling like you need coffee or sugar to a more naturally Energized Human…Read More