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Still need to write subject lines but would love feedback on these 4 emails from today’s workshop:
Email 1:
If you’re a CEO struggling to see real results from your team’s marketing efforts…
It may be because you lack a cohesive, data-driven strategy that truly resonates with your target audience.
There are two reasons this continues to h…Read More1 Comment -
I need to look at the sample email Shannon shared when it is posted in the notes from today, but here is my starting draft:
Subj line: Dog’s barking behavior still driving you crazy?
If your dog is still driving you crazy with their barking, making your home, walks, or outings stressful ….
It may be because
• They feel threatened or phy…Read More1 Comment -
Looking for thoughts and feedback on my lead magnet title. Does it attract and resonate with you / or not?
“Visual Charisma for Coaches”
The subtitle is”Elevate your online authority, attract next-level clients, connect more deeply, and create more impact (without being fake or sales-y)”
Here’s the link to the download page: https:/…Read More
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My first reaction was ‘what is visual charisma?’ I thought maybe it’s how you look or something about visualization. When I went to the landing page, I saw that it’s about your brand photos, but nothing in the name or subtitle indicates that. So, if you are wanting to attract people who are looking for brand photo info, I feel like you might need…Read More
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I am intrigued by the concept of “visual charisma” and it made me want to keep reading. Your explanations were clear and helped me understand possible areas my current materials may not be as effective and good as they could be! I like the idea of getting info in the download to help me understand and assess to see if I do need help.
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Same thoughts as Annette, wasn’t sure what Visual Charisma is. And doesn’t quite feel like it links to your lead magnet offering. So maybe “Using Visual Charisma to elevate your Coaching Authority” or indicating that it’s about using the visual charisma for the results. Great title suggestion by Annette
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Hi everyone, I’m back and looking forward to getting reacquainted, meeting new people, lifting each other up.
I’m a dietitian/functional nutritionist, Root Cause Protocol Consultant, ThetaHealer, author, and speaker and my content personality is writing, so yay for me, lol. I help women in early perimenopause who have been gaslit by…Read More
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Hey @annettepresleyhotmail-com – so happy you are here! Could you tell us what some ideas for your vehicle are? It would be helpful to see the variations in the statement from the workshop for context!
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I had energy producing habits, bioenergetics, energy supporting therapy, but I don’t know that I like any of them.
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Any feed back would be great- is it compelling? CTA in line with the content? More or Less “story”?
Email # 2
Subject line: She stood in the storm
And when the wind did not blow her away she adjusted her sailsGosh let me tell you when I picked up a camera again after not touching one for 20 years was it different! No film, lots of…Read More
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You have a lot of beautiful pieces in here, but it feels disjointed and the CTA came as a bit of a shock. I just didn’t see it heading there.
If a retreat is what you are offering, I would use the “she stood in the storm” story for something else and create a story around “you are the definition of beauty.” What does that mean and look like and…Read More
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@annettepresleyhotmail-com great job on the input around making the opening lines – which I LOVE – match the offer, which is the retreat. @kathymthoodphotography-com there seems to be a diconnect here. Maybe a tie in to how a retreat can help you expand your sails? reset after internal storms?
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I agree it feels kind of disjointed. You have the sentence, “Work that revolves around, empowering, uplifting, encouraging, getting curious, learning and showing each and every woman that “You are the definition of Beauty”.” Perhaps focusing on one of these things could provide a theme that ties the story to the call to action?
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The School of Spiritual Arts is the most creative, fun way to discover your life’s purpose organically
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@vdrake123gmail-com we need a vehicle up front (Intuition), not the name of the school/program
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Feel free to schedule a time on my calendar: https://calendly.com/badassity/consultation
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Great work this week, everyone! For those of you who are ready to promote your lead magnet more to grow your list after completing the experiment that we set for you this week… Here are my top 3 themes that you can watch the 1st session and come here to post your draft messaging and get feedback from your community. Remember, when you post here…Read More
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These are great! Email 3, the first line to me doesn’t capture the want it’s more stating the problem. Seeing sales slow flatline is an issue, not what I want. Perhaps turning it around to “If you’re a CEO whose sales are not sky rocketing” so that you’re stating the want of sales being high.