Community Forum – Content Personality Club

AmyHager

• 2 years, 6 months ago

Hey Club Members! I am heading out for vacation till May 11. Shannon will be here to teach on Wed and work with you on our next theme…. Busting Industry Myths.
If you still need help with you PSA – post it here on the community wally.
If you have shared your PSA – post the link of where you shared it here so we can go see. ❤️

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NancyChen

• 2 years, 6 months ago

Would sure appreciate any feedback, everyone! Thanks.

Can Tyrannical Parenting be Good for You?

The Career Benefits of a Relentlessly Demanding Childhood

https://www.linkedin.com/feed/update/urn:li:activity:6924058865529475072/

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- JoelElfman
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Hi Nancy, thanks for your most recent comments on my PSA. Watching and reading your latest. I think this is very well done. There are a few places where I might edit or switch statement vs. question or the other way around. I think you are getting more relaxed, more natural, and there was a wider emotional range in your voice in this video. Ray…Read More
  - NancyChen
    2 years, 6 months ago
    
    Thanks, Joel; good food for thought. My goal is to BOTH start building an audience of leads and prospects within my target profile of women and Asian women leaders. It sounds like a good next step for me may be to record a couple of different versions with a range of tones, strong to neutral, and ask my current and past clients for their…Read More
    - JoelElfman
      2 years, 6 months ago
      
      Glad to help!
- Shannon
  2 years, 5 months ago
  
  Hey Nancy! What feedback are you looking for specifically? Can you ask a couple of questions to guide us as we watch? That will be super helpful.
JoelElfman

• 2 years, 6 months ago

Based on sharing this during the Content Personality Club, and some very helpful feedback, I cut this version down. And if I go to the new title, I’ll probably cut the entertainment hypnosis paragraphs further. At most, I’ll give this thing one more go around, before I finally get it out the door. It’s time to get to the next one. 🙂
PSA v7 -…Read More

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- NancyChen
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Hi Joel, don’t know why my prior comment isn’t showing up here, but this reads very well to me. You dive deeper into the approach and process you take with your clients and I understood the value of what you have to offer clearly; and the tone is assuringly encouraging. Bravo! Say, would you give me some feedback on my latest video blog? I posted…Read More
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• 2 years, 6 months ago

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Shannon

• 2 years, 6 months ago

Great session today!

Remember these few things:

1. You want to pay attention to what themes your audience/community is resonating with. “The market will tell you”. This is so true!

2. The sooner you put out content and messaging, the sooner you will hone your marketing campaigns/strategy.

3. Please keep putting out messaging/content…Read More

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JoelElfman

• 2 years, 6 months ago

Here is the latest version of my PSA. V6 if you can believe it. Hopefully, it is getting cleaner & clearer.

PSA – I Have a Love/Hate Relationship w/ Entertainment Hypnosis
– I hate when an entertainment hypnotist uses the model and myth kept alive by so many movies, books, and videos that the hypnotist control someone’s mind. It makes people a…Read More

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JessicaPetter

• 2 years, 6 months ago

Hello everyone. I reworked my PSA a bit. I am planning to use this as a blog, and probably not an email at this time, FYI.

TITLE: Why therapy fails and hypnotherapy succeeds

Talk therapy SUCKS at solving your problems. It’s great at digging up the issues and gaining perspective, but it’s lousy at getting you past them. Fortunately, hyp…Read More

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- NancyChen
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Hi Jessica, this is now reading more effectively for me as a reader and covering all the bases. Brava!
- NancyChen
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  And Jessica, would you also give me some feedback on my latest video blog? I posted the link here on our wall 2 days ago. Your thoughts are most appreciated! Thanks, Nancy
- NancyChen
  2 years, 5 months ago
  
  Hi again Jessica, I believe you asked me for feedback on your title? I think the current title is very effective ; and I also think the first sentence that follows it makes your point even stronger, “Talk therapy SUCKS”. If you’re open to kicking the tone up, how about something like,” Why Therapy SUCKS and Hypnotherapy ROCKS at Solving Your…Read More
NancyChen

• 2 years, 6 months ago

Here’s my video on Linkedin, in case the youtube video is not accessible. Thanks for feedback!

Who Says Asian Women Leaders Have Nothing to Complain About?

FYI, I post video blogs weekly for women leaders, and particularly for Asian women leaders. I will try to post them early on this wall for your feedback before I post them, thanks!

https://www.linkedin.com/feed/update/urn:li:activity:6921872738127159297/

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Shannon

• 2 years, 6 months ago

Hello everyone! Here is the list of Headline Prompts/Titles that convert!

Play with these – and see just how much fun you can have inserting your own content ideas/topics. These work great for Post Titles and also Email Subject lines.

Headline Prompts
1. How You Can [benefit] Almost Instantly
2. How to Become [benefit] When You Feel…Read More

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AllyBerthiaume

• 2 years, 6 months ago

I could use some feedback on the PSA copy I wrote. I feel like I’m rambling and not hitting all the key points. Thoughts?

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PSA: You do not need to win awards or Amazon Bestselling status for your book to be worth reading, valuable, impactful, or powerful.

I went to a networking event recently and was put into a zoom room with a couple…Read More

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- JoelElfman
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Ally,
  You’ve got a ton of quality elements in here. Some thoughts here are similar, so you might consider cutting it down, but I’m not sure it’s necessary. It’s pretty compelling content, I don’t think there would be any bad choices about what to cut or if you kept it all. You could experiment with giving yourself a word count or paragraph limit,…Read More
- JoelElfman
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Coming back to the title. It didn’t capture my attention, the way your content does, and you’ve got some great lines in your content that I think you could adapt.
  
  For example:
  “The Amazon Bestsellers Award: It’s a stamp of approval from the algorithm Gods not a stamp of value.
  “An Amazon Bestsellers Award is great, but is your book compellin…Read More
  - AllyBerthiaume
    2 years, 6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much Joel for all your stellar feedback
- Shannon
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Hey @allytwprt-com – I love this piece! Like Joel said – I’d start with a title at the top that just packs a punch. well done!
- Amy Flo-Yo
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Agree you can say the same thing in much fewer words 🙂 And maybe focus more on what the ABS stamp really is – maybe that is another post…. It is people giving their book away for 99cents (audio only) to get enough ‘purchases’ for the algorithm to bump it. For those of us what have been around the block a bit – know it truly has no meaning,…Read More
  - AllyBerthiaume
    2 years, 6 months ago
    
    Thanks for your feedback Amy
- NancyChen
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Hi Ally, I really appreciated your point of view in this piece; it gave me information I found useful to keep in mind, and I felt quite encouraged too, I was, however, not sure what your product/service offering is and how it will benefit me — may want to land these points more firmly. “I’m in the business of writing quality books and focusing o…Read More
  - NancyChen
    2 years, 6 months ago
    
    continued… very good; so how does it serve me to get your help writing a great book vs going for the Amazon bestseller award? And can you share a client example? Would love to read more on that (I hope to write a book myself sometime). Thanks for reading, Ally!
    - AllyBerthiaume
      2 years, 6 months ago
      
      Thanks for your feedback Nancy!
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