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    • 4 months ago
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    Blair Hope

    • 4 months ago

    Here is my draft. I decided to start over because I want to get my Calm & Pets: Storm and Fireworks program out for 4th of July /summer. Some of this was bolded and I can’t figure out how to make it bold here.

    I’d love feedback. It may be too long. Thanks!

    Hook: Is your pet afraid of storms or fireworks?

    It’s summer… that time of yea…Read More

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      Dan Lewis
      3 months, 4 weeks ago

      Hi, Blair! I like the flow of your piece very much, especially how you note the FEELING of helplessness when your pet is afraid.
      The flow is great, but feels like it could be tightened up a bit. (perhaps consolidate the What I discovered and what I figured out sections?
      Great work!

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      AmyHager
      3 months, 3 weeks ago

      This might be giving away a little too much. Is there anything you feel you can pull back on in V2 that will give them clarity that they need your help?

      One suggestion is to replace this phrase: So I created a technique that anyone can quickly
      With: I teach pet parents (or owners – how ever they are identifying when you speak to them) how to…Read More

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    Jaini Shah

    • 4 months ago

    Hi Everyone! I’m Jaini, just joined the club. Excited to be here and really get clear on my messaging and start taking action on all the things I’ve started but not finished. And this time with the best messaging possible 😊😊
    I’m a health enthusiast and became a food relationship coach and Rapid Transformational Therapist after going through my…Read More

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    AmyHager

    • 4 months ago

    Share your content! If you have used your content on your social media, share it so we can see and support you! ❤️

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    SamirSelmanovic

    • 4 months, 1 week ago

    Where can I find last Wednesday’s CPC recording and, more importantly, the What’s New master template that was presented? Thank you

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    SamirSelmanovic

    • 4 months, 1 week ago

    Finally!!! Here’s my lead magnet, with 4 follow-up emails, and the offer. I’m nervous, after lots of work, and any feedback would be gold.
    http://www.mysticpowersreview.com

    Also, I am thinking of renaming it into Mystic Quiz. It’s more direct, more playful, and more clear. Mystic Powers Review is a mouthful, and I think it will have a harder time…Read More

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      Shannon
      4 months, 1 week ago

      @samirselmanovicnycgmail-com hello! I will be diving deep into this with you once you get onboarded in our other program – but for now, I’m thinking the quiz needs to be: Modern Mystic Quiz. I like this a lot – and it’s better than “review”. Thoughts?

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        SamirSelmanovic
        4 months, 1 week ago

        Love it! Also, I was thinking Mystic Leadership Quiz. The one you suggest is for more broad audience, more playful. While MLQ would identify who is this for in terms of my level 5 client, but not that playful and energizing like MMQ.

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        Dan Lewis
        3 months, 4 weeks ago

        Oooh, I like the dynamic justaposition of Modern Mystic!

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    SaraFins

    • 4 months, 2 weeks ago

    Hello! Here is my first stab at a ‘what’s new’ email. My CTA is to download my guide. I’d love any feedback. Is it clear? Compelling? Make sense? Thanks!

    Email 1:
    Is the fact that you feel like you aren’t good with numbers holding you back from getting your business finances in order?

    If so, here is what you can do about it:

    I’m see…Read More

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      AmyHager
      4 months, 1 week ago

      Not a numbers person can be one of the answers on your new quiz lead magnet.

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      AmyHager
      4 months, 1 week ago

      How can you touch more into the emotion? This line could be different: This holds them back from growing the revenue in their business and keeps their stress levels high.

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    SamirSelmanovic

    • 4 months, 2 weeks ago

    Re: Looking for a marketing tool

    Hello everyone (still working on uploading the profile pic),

    I have identified 5 of my super-ideal recent clients who got a lot from my coaching, more than they ever hoped for, and were utter joys to work with. I’d like to know what worked, why me, how, everything so I can use it to align my marketing with…Read More

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      SaraFins
      4 months, 2 weeks ago

      I believe there is a ‘template’ for getting testimonials somewhere in the past lessons. I think this would help you get the information you are looking for. Maybe search around and see if you can find it. Or maybe Shannon or Amy can point you in the right direction.

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        SamirSelmanovic
        4 months, 2 weeks ago

        Thank you Sara! It’s not about the testimonials though. Something strange is happening, actually. These begin as run of the mill leadership/executive coaching, helping them with leadership competencies. Then three sessions into it, the whole relationship goes into some form of flow/trance that allows people to blossom, grow, cross thresholds. So,…Read More

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    DianaLidstone

    • 4 months, 3 weeks ago

    Would you rather take a Business Self-Assessment or a Business Freedom Audit? (my lead magnet) FYI – I help Chief Everything Officers stop getting stuck in the day to day running of their business and step into their true role of Visionary CEO so they can build a self-running biz engine.

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