I have had to come back and read these a few times. I think the flow is good. I also like your PS in email 2.
For email 3, go with this subject line: What to expect here.

only suggestion is to perhaps tell us ahead that its the first of a 3 part series to manage our expectations when we get to the end. Also I can see how formatting will help this presentation but overall I like the idea and content

I like it!

It is clear that you have a lot of experience and intel about this topic – perhaps you could frame it a bit clearer off the top so it’s a bit more clear who you serve and what problem you are solving for (in this piece) I can read between the lines but I think the idea is that we shouldn’t make our customers – everyone reads for a “what’s in it…Read More

Is this following any of the formats?

I “think” that IS the idea Anthea – to use your strengths first and then lean in to other ways to extend & expand your voice – so for example I am writing first and podcast 2nd so I could take my writing and recorder it as you have done in reverse – also you could take some of your podcast clips/highlights and turn them into carousels or reels for…Read More

Hey Anthea — Audio!!! I’ve also seen voice put behind powerpoints or pictures so it almost makes a video – but you could do that and incorporate the ‘video’ into your newsletters.

One note – I “hear” that e-books are NOT effective lead magnet tools. Double check that but….other than that…I like # 1 and # 3 above

What about turning it into a ‘webinar/training’ with your voice behind slides or pictures?

@helloblairhope-com I LOVE THIS. Great job on making it feel like you. It feels warm and welcome! And I’m so happy you think of your email as a community now – people are looking for places to bon and belong. <3

Really nice CTA with “Please reply LOVE MY PETS so I know you’re feeling good about being here, too.”

I love the idea of “Heart Centered Pet Parents” as a community – that’s GREAT

@helloblairhope-com – great email. Love all the tidbits about the pets you have helped. The layout of the email is easy to read. How was this received? What response did you get?

I love this newsletter! The stories are so compelling. And I like the teaser about “stay tuned”. Well done @helloblairhope-com!

I love how clean this page feels, and the graphic you have of the two head really feels like tangled to smooth! I also love the title of your LCT. Most of your page seems to be clear on who it is for and how this helps. The only part I was not sure about was this: My ultimate mission is to empower women-owned small businesses and entrepreneurs to…Read More

Hi @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com – good job. LOVE the graphic at the top and the promise/transformation of the resource. I did get lost on the page, there is a lot going on there. What can be SIMPLIFIED and removed? And remember a landing page has no other menu items/social icons, CTA on the page. I’m including a link to our landing page…Read More

Your landing page looks great. Is there a way that you could align your boxes towards the bottom with the blue checkmarks that talk about the benefits of your list? It could just be a “me” thing, but the out-of-alignment looks a bit wonky on my screen. I did sign up but have not received any kind of confirmation I’m on your list type of email.

@antheadreamteamconsulting-ca – Hi! In addition to what Carrie said about putting all 4 boxes on the bottom row, I think you moving the first two sections to the top (Consider my invitation and when you sign up) and then moving the Who you are section at the top to the third placement. Remember, this is about them first.

I love how you tied your story into why people would value your in person retreat that offers an opportunity to connect with others.

approved. did you send this out? how was the response?