Hi Tanya, love your down-to-earth and friendly “let’s talk” energy. Your BQ section sounds good; but it kind of fades away from being punchy — last 2 bullets make it too long? and the section seems to fade into a “what we can do for you” — clearer separation between the two might be more effective. Good CTA; but “bankrupt” sounds (unnecessarily?) drastic and scary to me; soften a bit? Front section before BQ’s could probably be shortened by half and provide the same takeaways; suggest tightening to a few bullet points that hit the spot. Love how your copy goes for the jugular/bottom line! Thanks for sharing this.

I felt like I was getting lost in the suppose to”s. Would you consider giving common things and a taste of the how to get back on track?