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    JoelElfman

    2 years, 3 months ago

    1st draft
    BodyHypnosis Signature Program
    Are You Operating from Your Best Self?
    Create Clarity, Connection & Transformation
    – Reduce Stress, Anxiety
    – Create More Happiness, Confidence & Ease
    – Build New Habits, Beliefs & Ways of Thinking (i.e. Weight Loss, Stop Smoking, Imposter Syndrome and more)
    – Make Changes that are Positive, Healthy & Resilient, that will stand the challenges of day-to-day living

    Schedule a Clarity Call, and learn more how my BodyHypnosis 12 week Program can help you improve your life.

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    • Hello Joel, I like that you described most of your benefits in a positive way, maybe you could also rewrite the first benefit: Establish More Balance and Calmness (or something similar)? I would move the words around in your CTA: Schedule a Clarity Call, and learn how the 12-week BodyHypnosis Program can improve your life.

      • Thanks Kerstin, I’ve changed the CTA and looking at the other changes you suggested. Just sent it off to my web people. I’ll make more changes soon.

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