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    NicholeMyles

    2 years ago

    Here’s the link to my coaching page: https://www.mylestogo.net/coaching
    Thanks for all the help and feedback today – much appreciated!

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    • Nichole, this is really good. Most of the comments are about color or fonts.:
      1- Gold on white is sometimes hard to read, especially w/ a cursive script. With this particular font, both the opening “N”, and later the opening “I” in a later testimonial almost blend a bit w/ the italics designating it as a testimonial.

      2- “Until I discovered post-traumatic growth….” This whole paragraph is set of great statements. You could almost make them bullet points or maybe just bold the paragraph or do something to make it stand out.

      3- Your statement lines saying here are your results & here are your qualifiers are both buried at the end of a paragraph. I would separate out those lines.

      4- I would consider experimenting w/ lining up the bullet points for results & qualifiers, & putting the “I’m Ready” button on a separate line centered between both.

      5- “We can survive our traumas..” Again, great set of sentences. I’m not crazy about the yellow on white w/ this font. For me, it feels bit washed out, which I feel is wearing your message. Maybe a bold font, a different color. A yellow box w/ white font like your button or yellow w/ black font/

      6- The last testimonial is problematic for me, not sure if it is the green color or just that cursive script, plus italic. I feel it’s challenging to read, and diminishing the message.

      I hope some of this helps.

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