I really like the flow of everything but the first FACT – it seems a little clunky to me, not smooth. Would it be smoother if you remove the “but” connector and just used a semicolon?

Hi Ally, really great stuff in here. Shannon & Amy often talk about focusing on one idea. So, I would be curious if they would see needing “huge blocks of time” & “writing every day” are 2 concepts or 1. Also, “block” has multiple meanings. And could be fun to play with some of it’s meanings at the end, as in you “Writers’ “Block Party” vs. “Writer’s Block” Party, you might consider in the earlier text if you where & when you want to use “block”. You are talking about helping them find ways to create smaller units of time to write in your party. Can you use “blocking out” an hour here & there, & use another term for “huge blocks of time”? so “blocks” feeds back into your premise and the goal of the Party.

Based on previous comments above, switch “blocks” & “chunks”. I would consider using more emotionally charged words & metaphors. Here is a potential example for Fact 1: FACT — Large chunks of time are stressful and hard to prioritize but smaller blocks are much easier to put in your day and stick to.
Think about the number of tasks you have to accomplish every day. Big chunks of time are probably not realistic in your very busy, hectic schedule but finding small amounts of time to do your writing is.

Please forgive for this. I’m not sure if your last 2 Facts are potentially wandering from fact to opinion. I would advocate for making sure your facts are inarguable.
Fact 2 – I would consider adding something about, if you have a regular job or a host of responsibilities, then …. is exhausting.
Might also help you define your audience to people who don’t have the time to write full time. And your example might need tightening, there are people who exercise every day, but switch up muscle groups & types of exercises.
Fact 3 – I believe. there are modern writers who write every day, and advocate for it. (an example, if I remember correctly might be Steven Pressfield in “The War of Art”????), and I imagine there might be others. If you emphasize that most people or 1st time writers don’t have time to devote hours, patrons who will pay their bills while they write, etc., again, it might help define your audience.

You do have an absolutely brilliant event title in “Writers Block Party”. Block out time to join our Block Party, and learn ways to get past your writers block.

Hi Ally, Good points here leading to your CTA, I think your copy may be even more effective if it were tightened up and punchier. E.g., Myth: I will never finish my book unless I devote huge blocks of time to write EVERY SINGLE DAY. Fact: I have helped dozens of /many clients finish their books on deadline by co-designing a personal writing system /schedule that lets them DO IT THEIR WAY. Also, not sure what “that luxury” refers to. Hope this helps.

I like this! I lke how you compared it to working your muscles. And I like how you recapped the myth at the end.

Fact #1, while true, is not helpful to your cause. The fact you want is that a book CAN get done in small chunks.

Fact #2: Not writing every day doesn’t make you ineffective, it can actually be helpful

Fact #3: You can complete your book in a way that serves you, your life, and your schedule