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I just had to share. I did an outcome/result message and so far, I’ve got a 64% conversion rate. This stuff really works!
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I’m doing an upcoming workshop w/ a friend. It is a guided meditation & energetic healing. So I thought I would experiment w/ using the Nov format to promote. Energy is sometimes, a hard concept to easily quantify or make understandable for the masses, but I thought I would take a shot at it. I did my best. I encourage…Read More
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I got bogged down in the intro. Read it 3 times and I’m still not sure what it says. Do you need the energetically in the second sentence – You are unconsciously blocked by past trauma and events.
You are missing “years” from the next sentence, “For over 5,000 [years]. . . And I’m a cynic. When you say that Western science has caught up, it feels…Read More
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Hi Brenda,
Thank you very much for your comments. Since it is an event combining guided meditation & energetic healing, I feel like the energetically is needed but I will consider it further.
I was thinking that “Western science has caught up…” the other way, that Eastern philosophy was way ahead and we are only beginning to catch up. I guess…Read More-
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Hey Joel – your audience may very well be in tune with the concepts. I’m reading this as an “outsider,” so you might want to try it out on a few fans who are better informed of your offerings.
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Hi Brenda, thanks again for your suggestions. I was trying to expand the audience, but it might be more challenging than I thought.
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I really love the work you are doing, Joel. All the up front descriptions feel heavy, though I get why you want to share the detail there. Interested to see any edits you made, if you want to share them!
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Hi Beth, thanks for your encouraging note. I was trying to widen the audience but I don’t have quite right yet. This one may have to stick w/ folks more familiar w/ energy work. I will either share something tomorrow or just get it out the door.
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This is my long outcome post for Gutsy Women Finances community. Would love some feedback.
Here’s a major reason why you haven’t taken charge of your money, even though you are a smart and savvy woman with a good salary.
You weren’t taught much about personal finances – either from your family or school. So maybe you feel a little lost…Read More
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This is one of your strongest pieces yet!
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Thank you!
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Great piece!
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Thanks, Joel!
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This is a great piece – readable and motivating!
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Since we were talking about tigers & humor during Wed’s Convert session I thought I would share this picture.
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Many thanks again to Kerstin & Susan for their help.
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Here is a key reason why you are feeling stressed & overwhelmed, despite all your successes.Your brain is conditioned by your past.
When it notices something that resembles a past danger, your brain hits the alarm bell. It fills you with feelings of worry,…Read More
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You ditched the “how” in your story! Good work!!
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Well done Joel, great working with nyou too.
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Hi Anette, what happened that you got a 64% conversion rate. Conversion of who to what?