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Here’s my email/post. Is it specific enough, make sense and is it compelling? If not, what suggestions or questions do you have? Thanks!
If you have seen more than 3 doctors and still feel like crap…it may be because conventional medicine can’t give you any answers for your symptoms until your labs are at the level of diagnosis.
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4 Emails – book a call — Would love your feedback pls!!! (my ideal clients wants to go from overworked, underpaid business owner -Chief Everything Officer — to a well paid CEO of a well running business machine.) Here you go…..
1) HOOK/SUBJECT line: Working 24/7 and still feel broke?
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I am pushing you here… working 24/7, hustling on weekends & evenings and yet despite being overworked, you still feel broke – does not bridge over well to #2: Your marketing and content doesn’t position your solution as the BEST solution for your audience.
I know you have better ones to choose from that will speak to the overworked/under p…Read More
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Love Email 2 and 4! For Email 3 I feel like there are 2 opening sentences. Maybe just pick one sentence and focus on what their want is which they don’t have. Like “If you’re not feeling like you know exactly what to do and all your juggling balls are in a line, it may because you’re spending too much time on non-revenue generating activities”.…Read More
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Hi everyone, I’m back and looking forward to getting reacquainted, meeting new people, lifting each other up.
I’m a dietitian/functional nutritionist, Root Cause Protocol Consultant, ThetaHealer, author, and speaker and my content personality is writing, so yay for me, lol. I help women in early perimenopause who have been gaslit by…Read More
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Hey @annettepresleyhotmail-com – so happy you are here! Could you tell us what some ideas for your vehicle are? It would be helpful to see the variations in the statement from the workshop for context!
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I had energy producing habits, bioenergetics, energy supporting therapy, but I don’t know that I like any of them.
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What do you mean by vehicle? Also love what you do and definitely bewing some ideas for a possible collaboration!
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Would you rather take a Business Self-Assessment or a Business Freedom Audit? (my lead magnet) FYI – I help Chief Everything Officers stop getting stuck in the day to day running of their business and step into their true role of Visionary CEO so they can build a self-running biz engine.
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If I think back to my earlier days, freedom for sure!
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I don’t love the word audit – it has a negative connotation for me, so I prefer the first option.
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Freedom is more powerful for me
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I also like the word freedom. Business Self-Assessment seems vague to me. I”m not sure what the purpose of that assessment would be (from the title).
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Freedom for me!
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Here’s my first draft — entitled: The CEO who cleaned toilets
There once was a business owner who thought she was a CEO.
She owned a retail store where she did everything…
from bookkeeping, purchasing, selling, making displays, hiring, firing –She even cleaned the toilets!! She was exhausted trying to do everything herself even tho…Read More
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I think this is mostly there overall – I just want to ask – (because I am learning) is the ‘thought reversal’ clear enough? You USED to be the CEO and then needed to focus on your daughter and to your SURPRISE – the business grew – but WHY & HOW – I “think” needs to be addressed – so people can understand how you can help them.
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what is WLPM? I think you need to just say it – work less, profit more because you are diving into another acronym with GROW.
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Can you tie this back to toilets? After all, you started your business for freedom, even if you are not the one currently cleaning the toilets like I was! Let’s partner together and build your self-running business engine.
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I love Amy’s suggestion!
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such an impactful story
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we reviewed this on the connect call and I used my good feedback there 🙂