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Amy Flo-Yo
2 years, 8 months ago

I love it – quick, powerful and needed. I read and process VERY quickly so it was ok for me… but I can see how it might be “too fast” for others to keep up with.
- AmyHager
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  I totally couldn’t keep up with the words. But, the messaging is very powerful.
  - AmyHager
    2 years, 8 months ago
    
    I slowed it down to .75 and it was really easy.
    Also, the crash sound effect is too early. Hold it for when you put the 40% fact on the screen.
- Malinda Baum
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  Thanks! very helpful… adjustments will be made and posted today!!
- Malinda Baum
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  Thank you @aslcivicagmail-com, love the feedback!
- Malinda Baum
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  <3
JoelElfman
2 years, 8 months ago

Malinda, this is really good. Possible small considerations for tweaking. I’m with Amy H on the timing of the Breaking Glass. Although I might go further, and right after you shatter the glass, I would consider changing the language to 40% of trafficking is Male. You’ve shattered the glass for the reveal, For me, the extra panel to get “Male” did…Read More
- Malinda Baum
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  Thanks, Joel, I have been on the search for a GIF that would work for that exact spot… no luck yet though =(. I may post without it and then on the next one add that!
  - JoelElfman
    2 years, 8 months ago
    
    nothing on giphy. Too bad. If it’s important, I wonder what it would cost on Fivver or some other place to make. Good Luck!
NancyChen
2 years, 8 months ago

Nice multimedia piece, Malida! What if you start with”Myth: Sex trafficking is a girls……” then “Fact: it’s a boys ,…” because the word ‘Myth’ might keep me reading, whereas I may not otherwise ( I already know trafficking is a girl issue). Also the end, how about a quick phrase about what your #film is raising $$ for (a doc on ….. X% goes…Read More
- Malinda Baum
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  Thank you for the feedback… more videos to come!
Nancy Jackson
2 years, 8 months ago

Great job, loved this and very emotive and powerful!
- Malinda Baum
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  Thanks, Nancy!!

Malinda Baum
2 years, 8 months ago

Hi Joel, will you have a visual that goes with the text?
- JoelElfman
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  Hi Malinda, I hadn’t originally considered a visual, I was going to test recording it. I do like your idea though. I could imagine perhaps a horse drawing or two to illustrate. Thanks for the suggestion.
NancyChen
2 years, 8 months ago

Hi Joel! Wonder if using simpler, conversational words would make your piece even more powerful? Win over vs trumps; power through, knee jerk reactions vs anticipatory. Simplify and tighten it up perhaps? Also, perhaps refining your viewpoint; often willpower can only get you so far; then what? Seriously, consider HYPNOSIS — and why? FACT:…Read More
- JoelElfman
  2 years, 8 months ago
  
  Hi Nancy, Thanks for the excellent feedback. I will be put it to good use.

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