“And yet I love….” is distracting to me as a reader because it makes me do a 180 degree turn.
Instead, why not stay and drill down your point, “The truth is…. What’s really happening during hypnosis is….imagination, different version, playing hooky from customary behaviors, superpower…” (lovely stuff). I appreciate the stage = it’s…Read More

JoelElfman, I love your example of the work you do with your clients compared to the entertainment show you see on a stage.

I enjoyed your take on what’s real/illusion as I’d expect that’s the general hangup for people. I absolutely get your love for what you do…I think perhaps add a bit more on that counter side so it’s not about trying to sound convincing – but why the misunderstandings really peeve you off. Again, well written, but I’m not feeling the…I guess…Read More

Love it! The Lara Croft bit was the part that “really took me there.” It painted a picture in my mind, and it will be the part that will resonate with me throughout the day. 🙂

OMG! This is SOOOOOO good

This is good. Did it feel good writing it?

Good points Diana, I like that this was meant to challenge people to think beyond “the norm” as if there aren’t other ways to gain visibility and find your clients, and then you also offer “proof” with your CTA. Well done!!

Hi Diana, nice PSA. I would love to read a bit more about your solution at the end there. How did you work with your client to HELP HER get those results? This would give me an intro to your process and solution.