AmyHager

Veronica (Vee) Drake
4 months, 3 weeks ago

WHOA! I jsut went thru your content AND I WAS EXCITED to get my list — this is OUTSTANDING
- Veronica (Vee) Drake
  4 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  you REALLY got it goin on!!!!!! we need a cuppa virtual coffee xo
  - ReeJade
    4 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    @vdrake123gmail-com email newsletter went out. would love your feedback 😀 thank you again!
- ReeJade
  4 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  @vdrake123gmail-com thank you VEEEEEEE!!!!! This makes me happy ! And I agree! Thank you for going through it for me.
Veronica (Vee) Drake
4 months, 3 weeks ago

I would love to see/hear how you planned/plan your content for your newsletter – Im on you list 🙂
- ReeJade
  4 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  @vdrake123gmail-com what I did was take my membership framework, which is 6 steps and i break it down into bite size weekly content. I focus on each step for 2 months=12 months of content. I format it like this (1) Something personal about me – i always want to relate in my emails (2) a bite size membership strategy and execution plan (3) a member…Read More
  - CarrieWulf
    4 months, 1 week ago
    
    That is a brilliant idea ReeJade!
    - ReeJade
      4 months, 1 week ago
      
      thank you! it’s easy for me to see where people are stuck and where people unsubscribe at.
AmyHager
4 months, 2 weeks ago

Good flow! Congrats on getting this done. You knocked it out of the park!
- ReeJade
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  thank you!
Dan Lewis
4 months, 1 week ago

Nice assessment, Reejade! Really thorough and organized in easy-to-understand chunks. I had two thoughts:
Your title – Without context, I didn’t know what kind of membership you were talking about until you introduced yourself as someone who’s experienced in online communities. Feels to me like the title needs some kind of qualifier, like…Read More
- ReeJade
  4 months, 1 week ago
  
  @danbadassity-com you are amazing! thank you for taking the time to go through and giving me your perspective as someone who doesn’t know anything about me. I will make these changes!
Jaini Shah
4 months ago

I just downloaded this and it looks lovely and is very detailed. Like what Dan said, I didn’t realise it was memberships for communities, and that would have pulled me in faster because I’m looking to increase the membership in my community. So adding that clarity to the title might be helpful. Just a technical note, I am receiving the emails…Read More
- ReeJade
  4 months ago
  
  Hi thank you ! Can you explain the clarity in the titile because it says membership growth . I’m not really understanding the disconnect . What would be a title that made you understand. You and Dan are the only 2 people who said they didn’t get it. Also the scoring has instructions. If it is a yes you put a 1 . If it is a no you out 0. And…Read More
  - Jaini Shah
    4 months ago
    
    For the title, I think if I had read something like grow your Community Membership it would have been direct. Membership on its own could have been membership to a club, a mastermind, business subscription memberships. Each email I received twice, the one delivering the checklist and the follow up email with the mini-trainings I received twice…Read More
    - ReeJade
      4 months ago
      
      Awww! Thank you ! I see your description of what you think a membership is is not what I teach and so many people get it confused on what a membership is . It’s community . Some people call course and club membership and that’s just not true. I will add some language in there to speak to whay a membership is and I can a explanation video on the…Read More

AmyHager
2 months, 4 weeks ago

Try putting it into the template and see if it flows. But, for now… go with what is easy to get something out there. 😉 Whitney’s suggestion will be fun.
Run with what you have above for the tripping over stuff out the door.

KathyTarbell
4 months ago

I think that it is somewhat clear on what the masterclass covers. You might consider taking out the second to last paragraph ( Are you clear….) Clear is used quite a bit at the end of the email you may want to use some other words.
- Jaini Shah
  4 months ago
  
  Thank you! Good point, clear is there a lot, I’ll edit that part 🙂
Shannon
3 months, 3 weeks ago

Hi @jaini-shah15gmail-com – love this take on holidays and over eating. Can you include in the last paragraph a bulleted list of the 3 takeaways from the workshop?

AmyHager
3 months, 4 weeks ago

Don’t add fluff to the hook line
Hook Line: Something weird happened, I bought a croissant and decided not to eat it, and then A YEAR LATER- the croissant is still here 😷😷

Get straight to it: I bought a croissant and decided not to eat it, and then A YEAR LATER- the croissant is still here
- Shannon
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  agreed! less words = more clarity (in cases like this)

AmyHager
4 months ago

Did you watch the landing page training? It doesn’t seem so, my suggestion is to go back to it and watch it.
Your email is more aligned VS your landing page.
- Jaini Shah
  4 months ago
  
  Thanks! Which month is the landing page training? I’ll add that to the resources I need to watch.
  - AmyHager
    4 months ago
    
    September 2022: Landing Page Copy
    - Jaini Shah
      4 months ago
      
      Thanks will watch this!

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