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Hi ladies. I’m so thrilled to finally be here with you all. A big thank you to @clientsmshannonhernandez-com and @amymshannonhernandez-com for gently nurturing me into this space and a BIG thank you to @jaini-shah15gmail-com for helping me on my healing journey to get ready to start this work.
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Ahahaha I also went to yoga this morning but to teach. I’m so excited to finally be here!
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Yay!! So happy to see you here and can’t wait to see your next journey of smashing it in messaging 🤗🤗
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Thank youuuuu @jaini-shah15gmail-com You are one of the reasons I am in here 🙂
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Whitney, I love your wording! But wonder if it is specific enough. It will be interesting to see Amy’s @amymshannonhernandez-com response.
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Try putting it into the template and see if it flows. But, for now… go with what is easy to get something out there. 😉 Whitney’s suggestion will be fun.
Run with what you have above for the tripping over stuff out the door.
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Email Number 4- Does this email speak to those looking to change their health and is it clear that if they sign up for the Masterclass they will have the answers to better health? @amymshannonhernandez-com @clientsmshannonhernandez-com
Subject Line: Do Holidays mean Overeating?
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I think that it is somewhat clear on what the masterclass covers. You might consider taking out the second to last paragraph ( Are you clear….) Clear is used quite a bit at the end of the email you may want to use some other words.
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Thank you! Good point, clear is there a lot, I’ll edit that part 🙂
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Hi @jaini-shah15gmail-com – love this take on holidays and over eating. Can you include in the last paragraph a bulleted list of the 3 takeaways from the workshop?
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Email Number 3- if you read this email, would you want to know more about what food to eat and avoid? Hoping to get some discovery calls booked! @amymshannonhernandez-com @clientsmshannonhernandez-com
Subject Line: Does it rot?
Preview: How do you know if food is real?Hook Line: Something weird happened, I bought a croissant and decided…Read More
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Don’t add fluff to the hook line
Hook Line: Something weird happened, I bought a croissant and decided not to eat it, and then A YEAR LATER- the croissant is still here 😷😷Get straight to it: I bought a croissant and decided not to eat it, and then A YEAR LATER- the croissant is still here
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agreed! less words = more clarity (in cases like this)
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I am creating a landing page for an online masterclass that I am hosting on 29 July 2024. Below is the text for the landing page (or you can have a look at the landing page here: https://wildbutterfly.myflodesk.com/nkh6awy5pc). Would love your thoughts everyone in the community and @amymshannonhernandez-com and @clientsmshannonhernandez-com on…Read More
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Did you watch the landing page training? It doesn’t seem so, my suggestion is to go back to it and watch it.
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Thanks! Which month is the landing page training? I’ll add that to the resources I need to watch.
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Thanks will watch this!
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WHOOO HOOOOO! I went to yoga this AM and came back to see you here 💜