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    Amy Civica

    2 years, 4 months ago

    Hi lovelies!
    I am working on my vision statement. I am working off of my Universal Truth: Embracing your emotional relationship with food heals your mind, body and soul.

    The Mission:
    We believe creating awareness around your (a, the?) relationship with food can heal the world.

    I am struggling with ” your, a, the” also is “the world” too broad?

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    • I would keep it ‘your’. What you do is very personal.
      How does our relationship with food help heal the world? It is too broad the way it is written now. Why is this important?

    • I agree with Amy, if your vision is around the “your” your mission should be too. (“Embracing your…” and creating awareness around you…”) It’s more personal. I also don’t think world here is too broad. If one person at a time can be healed / have awarenesss around food then essentially you’re healing the world, just one person at a time 🙂

    • I would leave the “your” but I am not clear how the personal awareness about food is healing the world.

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