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Why learning only steps and patterns fail in dancing Argentine Tango
The reasons you’re not getting the results you want in classes is because you’re focusing on just steps and patterns.
The steps and patterns fail you because you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and conne…Read More
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This can flow better:
The steps and patterns fail you because you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and connection.This is keeping you stuck and from progressing to dancing with better dancers.
Steps and patterns are failing preventing you from dancing with better dancers because you’re neglecting to consider your p…Read More
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I would consider reversing “The steps and patterns fail you because you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and connection.” to “you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and connection, your steps and patterns can fail.”
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Will you join us in Miami on April 25-27th to create content live??? Here is the info. Let me know if you have any questions: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VNkbRw-fbST16XnItStSvVhkkeD4iWs6vSOkwbYJrUU/edit
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Looking forward to seeing who will be in Miami with me!
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Can’t wait to see your questions that we worked on together. Share them here and be ready to brainstorm on Wednesday. ❤️
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Possible hooks:
*3 reasons you’re losing out on dances at festivals
* why your embrace could be costing you dances
*why you feel uncomfortable in your embraces
*want to improve your social dance connection and get more dances?
*from chaos to clarity in your embrace
*from ho-hum to orgasmic in your social dancing
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I like all of these, I would change “want to improve…” to “how to improve…”
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got it – thank you
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This is my favorite: *want to improve your social dance connection and get more dances? You are focusing on those who already dance, right?
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great – thank you and yes
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Hi Daniela, I’m new so take my comments w/ a grain of salt. Personally, I don’t know what embrace means in that context. I definitely know what the last entry means…”Stop getting stepped on!” I don’t know what social dances mean? I’m guessing that your target audience knows exactly what that means? Does that mean going to dance clubs and getting…Read More
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thank you
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H! Here is my first stab at a value content email. I did not use the 3 related tips format. Not sure if that is a must, but I felt it flowed better this week. Feedback appreciated!
Email subject line: Why focusing on your revenue could actually be hurting your business
and what to do instead
Hi TEST,
When it comes to keeping track…Read More
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I like this Sara. (Being a person who feels like Charlie Brown in class with the blah blah teacher -the minute people talk money/revenue / profit… huh?) I feel that I might like it shortened – you say “focus on profitability” – and my mind wants to know right away what that is and then vs what revenue is…. and then a tie in and your CTA….…Read More
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Thank you for the input and your honesty!
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I love this! I had a question about the difference between revenue and profitability, and then you answered it. You asked questions and shared tips without making me feel like I was doing something wrong, and when I realized I don’t do this – you offered a solution and hope!
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Thank you so much, Blair! I’m glad it felt clear and helped you in some way.
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Hi Sara, I felt there was too much explanation. I think most people understand some of the things you were explaining. So I cropped considerably. If you want to keep more of the explanations, I would tighten it up.
Technically, most of what is written is about making money & profit which could apply to marketing, sales, or other arenas.
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Thanks for the thoughtful input, Joel!
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I think this is great, Can you write it how you would post it? I feel like you are still sharing a draft/notes here.