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  • Great meeting today! Here are the links of examples that Brea shared with us today + @diana-lidstonegmail-com‘s…Read More

  • Hey guys — would love further feedback on this landing page? Would the word ‘stealers’ or wasters be better than saboteurs? This is the draft for the first iteration of the workshop. https://dianalidstone.com/uncover-hidden-profits/

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    • Diana – I have been thinking about wasters and stealers for several days!!! Not sure if you’ve chosen one – but I’m opting on “wasters”. – I feel like I want to steal more time to do things but I know that I waste time doing things that are distracting or?
      maybe this helps???

    • I think either works, but I like stealers better because waster implies that the person is wasting time rather than the activity taking up their time so they can’t do more important things.

      I don’t know if this works better or not, but what about 10x productivity for you and your team.

      And I would put 9 time stealers instead of 9 sabateurs at the end.

    • At first, I liked saboteur best, but when I checked the definition, it signified that a person does an action deliberately. For your workshop, I would probably go with waster. While the persons are active, they concentrate on the wrong activities.

  • Have you shared your content from this month? If so, how did it go????

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  • Trying to write this Turning Point/Journey piece been a tortuous piece for me. It’s still way too long, but at least it’s progress.
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    Almost all of my life I’ve sat uneasily on an uneven 3 legged stool, wobbling back & forth between a wild imagination, physical activities and the expectations of others or society.

    ⁃ As a young boy, I…Read More

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    • OK – what is the call to action here?

    • I think it is brilliant, flows wonderfully. A few small take outs to tighten in up.. and off it goes:

      DANG IT – the friggin strike throughs won’t show up in here. SO here it is with stuff just deleted:

      Almost all of my life I’ve sat uneasily on an uneven 3 legged stool, wobbling back & forth between a wild imagination, physical activities a…Read More

      • Thanks @Amy Flo-Yo for the comments & for the CTA reminder. I got so caught up in the writing, I forgot.

        CTA – If you are interested in connecting mind & body, being that better, more natural version of yourself, then reach out and schedule a discovery chat. If you can imagine a happier, more confident you, getting more done, easily &…Read More

        • LOL – still too many words 😉 As a past grant writer I know all about more words to fill word count and fluff…BUT this type of stuff needs to be “easy” to process. That first sentence is clunky. just use this: If you can imagine a happier, more confident you, getting more done, easily & effortlessly, and feeling better about life then we…Read More

    • I tightened it a little, so here’s my version:

      For most of my life I’ve sat uneasily on a 3 legged stool, wobbling back & forth between a wild imagination, physical activities, and the expectations of others or society.

      ⁃ As a young boy, I did Modern Dance, until it didn’t seem like the thing a boy should be doing.

      ⁃ I was a voracious reader…Read More

      • Thanks Annette, wonderful edit. You & Amy Flo-Yo are awesome.

        • Many thanks to @Amy Flo-Yo & @Annette Presley for their wonderful edits. I blended parts of both for the rewrite. I also added a new paragraph to start, because I thought it fit the theme really well. I also included an alternative flip at the bottom of the 1st paragraph, just in case folks thought that might be better.
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          • I like the beginning. There is some duplication. I don’t think you need both of these paragraphs:

            Hypnosis has given me more confidence, made me feel more relaxed, and has allowed me to help an amazing array of people.

            ⁃ Hypnosis has been a beautiful gift to me, helping me become more confident and relaxed, and allowing me to help an amazing a…Read More

          • I would use but in truth instead of and in truth with the second paragraph. And there is redundancy in these two paragraphs.

            The body is as much a part of our unconscious as our mind. The body always speaks the truth to us, and it gives us simple, natural, elegant tools to help us, even when we are inarticulate, caught up in overthinking, or…Read More

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