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Email #4 for my nurture sequence. Do you connect with the story and the points?
Hey, FNAME!
A few months ago, I was on holiday in Istanbul, Turkey and everything that could go wrong WENT wrong.
I got a serious sugar craving and ate a fully processed sugar, gluten and cream loaded baklava – which was kind of unusual considering the number o…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Hi Jaini. Thank you for your message.
The Club wall is set up for peer to peer review, and we encourage you to tag 2 or 3 of your peers when you post asking for feedback. This will hopefully get their attention and get conversations going.
As you can imagine, Shannon and I do not review every single posted content in this program, as that is…Read More
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I liked this a lot Jaini and think it’s quite clear – both the connecting with audience and your invitation for a discovery call. Sorry it’s so quite here – I admit, I forget to log on. Feel free to reach out directly if you want some feedback – wdnyc2014@gmail.com
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Thanks Whitney!
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I like this, it’s very relatable. I think this sentence needs a little reworking and learnt should be learned. “I learnt so much about my big feelings that I was holding in as soon as I shared them with my husband, it reminded me the power of talking out loud.”
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Thanks Annette! Any suggestions on what needs reworking in the sentence?
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I think I’d add another point to the what you can do section about sharing your big feelings with someone and skip the ‘to wrap up’ sentence and the ‘I learned so much’ sentence.
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Would love your comments on this Email #3 for my nurture sequence. Does this sound inviting and speaking to someone you know?
Hello, I’m dropping in again, FNAME.
I love all things mindful eating, empowering transformation, and creating vibrant, joyful lives. But I also know that finding balance, breaking old habits, and stepping into a h…Read More
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Following yesterday’s call here’s a draft of the email I’d like to send out. Let me know if it’s catchy and if you get the point?
Subject line: Don’t Invite the Holiday Weight
Preview: Have fun on holiday!Hook: Say goodbye to the holiday weight – or just don’t invite it in the first place!
Sound too good to be true?Here’s the thing,…Read More
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Hey @jaini-shah15gmail-com, I love this email because it is a huge struggle for everyone. I would be more tempted to open the email if it had a catchy title like “Escape the holiday hangovers and turkey dinner syndrome” and as a sub title “Do this instead” or something around those lines.
I would have this sentence right at the top. That would…Read More
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Thanks @jenniferjenniferjaneyoung-com! Oh my gosh, great idea on using the questions in social media for engagement. I will add that to my Instagram ideas to action!
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I see you having fun playing with this theme. I can’t wait to see what results you have had in our session today 💜
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NURTURE SEQUENCE- EMAIL 1
Would love some feedback here please, is the email too wordy? Am I direct enough as to who I’m talking to and what I believe? Note I am using this as a welcome sequence for those who join my list through my landing page/link in bio form.
Subject: FirstNAME, Nice to meet you!
Preview: [Lets Get Healthy]Hello…Read More
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individuals in your BIG mission section falls flat. It seems not like you and is cold. Look at your bold qualifiers… what else can you use there?
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Thanks Amy. What are bold qualifiers? Here’s a re-work of the Big Mission: “My BIG mission is to help tired individuals change their mindset and food habits so that they can wake up feeling fresh, have the energy to do all the things they love, go on adventures with ease and just feel light, energetic and happy in their body. “
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How do you find the edited version? Also this is a third version. I really want to get this nurture sequence out this week, so any feedback would be great!
“My BIG mission is to empower individuals who feel tired, stuck, or held back by fears, mental blocks, or unhealthy habits to take a stand for their health. I want to help you wake up feeling…Read More
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Hi @jaini-shah15gmail-com Here are some thoughts.
This empowering statement would have kep me reading if it were at the beginning: My BIG mission is to help individuals who are seeking more energy to do the things they love, want to break through any fears or mental blocks that are holding them back to take a stand for their health, master their…Read More
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Thanks Jen! That helps. I was following the format in the Nurture Sequence training that’s why the Big Mission is where it is in the email 🙈 But totally get what you’re saying. Also need to refine the pain points and the ideal outcome.
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QUESTION- Can the May 2024 Lead Magnet Nurture sequence also work for creating my general nurture sequence? So when people sign up to my email list from my link in bio form can I use this Nurture Sequence as a template?
Also is there something I can watch to help with my messaging on my link in bio form/landing page?4 Comments-
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Related to this would you suggest that as I create my new welcome sequence, I add those are already on my list (and may have gone through my old sequence) to the new sequence to run through it? @amymshannonhernandez-com?
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May 2024 nurture sequence is totally the one to use as a guide
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Did you watch landing page copy in the Direct Offer Content? It isn’t going to be exactly what you are asking for (bio is coming up though) but I think it will help.
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Thanks! I’ll add this to my list to watch. In relation to my email list- would you suggest that as I create my new welcome sequence, I add those who are already on my list (and may have gone through my old sequence) to the new sequence to run through it?
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Jaini Shah
Food Relationship Coach, Rapid Transformational Therapist
At 30 Jaini felt like she was 60 and knew something had to change. In January 2020 she embarked on a health journey that turned everything around from having more energy, to having normal thyroid function and being happier on a day to day basis. She left her corporate law career and became a Food Relationship Coach and a Rapid Transformational Therapist to help others also rewrite their health stories. She loves to be camping in the bush if she's not coaching, being outdoors and always being curious about how we can be better than yesterday.
@amymshannonhernandez-com and @clientsmshannonhernandez-com tagging you as it’s really quiet here in the forum and would love to get momentum on this and get my welcome sequence out. So please share your feedback as we wait for community members