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Email Number 2- Please share your thoughts- Does this email make you feel curious about your hunger needs? And get you thinking, do I want to reassess my relationship with food?
Subject Line: Hunger isn’t about food 😱😱
Preview: I was recently proven right about this, you can be full and lose weight!Hook Line: Hunger is 99% NEVER about the…Read More
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I am creating a landing page for an online masterclass that I am hosting on 29 July 2024. Below is the text for the landing page (or you can have a look at the landing page here: https://wildbutterfly.myflodesk.com/nkh6awy5pc). Would love your thoughts everyone in the community and @amymshannonhernandez-com and @clientsmshannonhernandez-com on…Read More
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Did you watch the landing page training? It doesn’t seem so, my suggestion is to go back to it and watch it.
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Hi Guys! Here’s my first email draft since Wednesday’s call. I’d love if you could have a read and let me now, does this make you want to sign up for a free discovery call?
Subject Line: Tell Your Mind Better Things
Preview: You can cheat your mind so that you can have a better experience.It was 11.30pm, there’s a massive elephant 5 meters…Read More
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Flip the order of this: I definitely did start to pray on repeat. But before that, I felt helpless, powerless, and that anything could happen. And my husband was right next to me calm as a cucumber. I was wondering, what’s wrong with me, why am I freaking out? What am I not understanding?
I felt helpless and powerless that anything could happen i…Read More
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Hi! @amymshannonhernandez-com I want to work on my welcome sequence for my email list and also my email sequence for my graduate clients. What’s the best way to seek support for working on this? Do I post here the actual content of the emails or how do I go about it?
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My understanding Jaini is that you can post your drafts here and we all (including Amy and Shannon when they can) give feedback/comments.
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Jaini! you are already an amazing community member. Thanks for bringing your question here.
Once you watch the email nurture sequence replay from May – please post here. Your fellow Club members are here to ask you questions to help you get clearer. Shannon and me will be here to help you get clearer as well. But, you need to watch the replay…Read More
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About Me

Jaini Shah
Food Relationship Coach, Rapid Transformational Therapist
At 30 Jaini felt like she was 60 and knew something had to change. In January 2020 she embarked on a health journey that turned everything around from having more energy, to having normal thyroid function and being happier on a day to day basis. She left her corporate law career and became a Food Relationship Coach and a Rapid Transformational Therapist to help others also rewrite their health stories. She loves to be camping in the bush if she's not coaching, being outdoors and always being curious about how we can be better than yesterday.
I LOVE this piece – and the opening line. and the story! Well done @jaini-shah15gmail-com. Remember, subject lines and preview lines need to be 5 words or less – so you need to rethink this long preview line.