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Would love feedback on this email I wrote after our session today!
Subject: It’s not about the stuff
Preview: What I’ve learned as a self taught marketer (a series)Hey NAME,
Several years ago, as a new mom learning to juggle a new career and a 1 year old, I found out my job was being eliminated. One of the biggest stressors in lif…Read More
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Nice one! Like Amy mentioned, more emotion would be great. Is there a part of the story where you made a sale to the mum who wants to run 5k? So as to share the story and then the point comes after in brief? Just a suggestion.
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Context: I want to personally send a message to the people who clicked the workshop link but did not register. This email is a personal email sent to them.
Subject Line: Checking in with you
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Hey {!firstname_fix},I noticed you clicked on the link for my SOP Summer School: High-Touch Client Onboarding with Low-Touch Effort workshop…Read More
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Hi @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com I think this email is fine. I love getting these types of emails because oftentimes I click on something and get distracted and forget about it. I’m not sure what your content personality is but if it’s video or audio i think adding a personal video answering common FAQs (this will save the time of…Read More
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I always wondered how to send these emails. Thanks for sharing, email looks good!
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I finally have my Checklist Assessment DONE!
http://www.membershipsthatsell.com/checklist
WHEW… it took some time as I needed to work on the content pieces for the nurture sequence. So far I have received some good feedback!
I would love your feedback everyone 😀
Thank you in advance!
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WHOA! I jsut went thru your content AND I WAS EXCITED to get my list — this is OUTSTANDING
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you REALLY got it goin on!!!!!! we need a cuppa virtual coffee xo
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@vdrake123gmail-com email newsletter went out. would love your feedback 😀 thank you again!
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@vdrake123gmail-com thank you VEEEEEEE!!!!! This makes me happy ! And I agree! Thank you for going through it for me.
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I would love to see/hear how you planned/plan your content for your newsletter – Im on you list 🙂
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@vdrake123gmail-com what I did was take my membership framework, which is 6 steps and i break it down into bite size weekly content. I focus on each step for 2 months=12 months of content. I format it like this (1) Something personal about me – i always want to relate in my emails (2) a bite size membership strategy and execution plan (3) a member…Read More
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That is a brilliant idea ReeJade!
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thank you! it’s easy for me to see where people are stuck and where people unsubscribe at.
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Good flow! Congrats on getting this done. You knocked it out of the park!
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thank you!
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Nice assessment, Reejade! Really thorough and organized in easy-to-understand chunks. I had two thoughts:
Your title – Without context, I didn’t know what kind of membership you were talking about until you introduced yourself as someone who’s experienced in online communities. Feels to me like the title needs some kind of qualifier, like…Read More-
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@danbadassity-com you are amazing! thank you for taking the time to go through and giving me your perspective as someone who doesn’t know anything about me. I will make these changes!
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I just downloaded this and it looks lovely and is very detailed. Like what Dan said, I didn’t realise it was memberships for communities, and that would have pulled me in faster because I’m looking to increase the membership in my community. So adding that clarity to the title might be helpful. Just a technical note, I am receiving the emails…Read More
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Hi thank you ! Can you explain the clarity in the titile because it says membership growth . I’m not really understanding the disconnect . What would be a title that made you understand. You and Dan are the only 2 people who said they didn’t get it. Also the scoring has instructions. If it is a yes you put a 1 . If it is a no you out 0. And…Read More
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For the title, I think if I had read something like grow your Community Membership it would have been direct. Membership on its own could have been membership to a club, a mastermind, business subscription memberships. Each email I received twice, the one delivering the checklist and the follow up email with the mini-trainings I received twice…Read More
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Awww! Thank you ! I see your description of what you think a membership is is not what I teach and so many people get it confused on what a membership is . It’s community . Some people call course and club membership and that’s just not true. I will add some language in there to speak to whay a membership is and I can a explanation video on the…Read More
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Im watching margarita’s and mission statements class. I feel like there is SO much I want to say I believe in – I love the saying universal truth – that thing that never changes. The tide will always roll. the sun will always rise and set..
I feel like since I’ve started this program two months I am not the same in so many great ways.
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I tool have been thinking (and writing on this one) happy to discuss – I know what my baselines are and I see them in notebooks going back for YEARS so I just want to get them down and done – happy to discuss tomorrow
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AWESOME!!!!
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Great ask! And, it is such a good session. Good replay to dive into
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Which replay is margarita’s and mission statements class? What month can I find it in?
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Jaini Shah
Food Relationship Coach, Rapid Transformational Therapist
At 30 Jaini felt like she was 60 and knew something had to change. In January 2020 she embarked on a health journey that turned everything around from having more energy, to having normal thyroid function and being happier on a day to day basis. She left her corporate law career and became a Food Relationship Coach and a Rapid Transformational Therapist to help others also rewrite their health stories. She loves to be camping in the bush if she's not coaching, being outdoors and always being curious about how we can be better than yesterday.
I like this… but one tiny change. You need to talk emotion… not brain. Change this line: I landed a job in corporate retail for a running company, but immediately knew I didn’t fit in.
I landed a job in corporate retail for a running company, but immediately felt that I didn’t fit in.