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Ok, so taking action and would love feedback @nancychen1gmail-com, @brhwcoachinggmail-com, @amymshannonhernandez-com… Thanks
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I totally couldn’t keep up with the words. But, the messaging is very powerful.
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I slowed it down to .75 and it was really easy.
Also, the crash sound effect is too early. Hold it for when you put the 40% fact on the screen.
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Thanks! very helpful… adjustments will be made and posted today!!
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Thank you @aslcivicagmail-com, love the feedback!
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Malinda, this is really good. Possible small considerations for tweaking. I’m with Amy H on the timing of the Breaking Glass. Although I might go further, and right after you shatter the glass, I would consider changing the language to 40% of trafficking is Male. You’ve shattered the glass for the reveal, For me, the extra panel to get “Male” did…Read More
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Thanks, Joel, I have been on the search for a GIF that would work for that exact spot… no luck yet though =(. I may post without it and then on the next one add that!
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nothing on giphy. Too bad. If it’s important, I wonder what it would cost on Fivver or some other place to make. Good Luck!
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Nice multimedia piece, Malida! What if you start with”Myth: Sex trafficking is a girls……” then “Fact: it’s a boys ,…” because the word ‘Myth’ might keep me reading, whereas I may not otherwise ( I already know trafficking is a girl issue). Also the end, how about a quick phrase about what your #film is raising $$ for (a doc on ….. X% goes…Read More
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Thank you for the feedback… more videos to come!
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Great job, loved this and very emotive and powerful!
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Thanks, Nancy!!
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A first attempt at a visual to go with a post (no, I haven’t done word-making yet… I just want an attagirl for finally making time to do something with this!)
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Is there a way to friend the whole group?I can’t seem to tag anyone?
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Hi Amy! We are working on tagging and trying to get it set up so we can tag the name. Right now it is tagged by email address – which is not so helpful.
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My Industry Myths….Do my facts make sense?
Myth: If you could just eat less and exercise more it would solve all your body blues!Let me clarify; I say ‘blues” because it’s time we stop saying our body has a “problem” or is “broken”
Fact: Our thoughts are the strongest part of our body system. When your thoughts are about how you are b…Read More
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Who is in your Zoom Mate pod this month?
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Amy Flo-Yo and Carolyn Romano
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This is awesome! Be sure to post as a written post AND then do a video on the same content. Let’s see which performs better.
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and email?
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Great – you are going to want to tag them to review this!
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sure – send in email too!
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Hi Amy C, this is really strong. My favorite fact, followed by your CTA are genius. Of the Facts, the 90% for me was the strongest. I would consider moving that into 1st FACT position. And move the thoughts to the bottom or somewhere below. I have a minor disconnect with the title, I feel like either. the “all” should come out or “blues” becomes…Read More
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thank you Joel
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Hey Club Members! I am heading out for vacation till May 11. Shannon will be here to teach on Wed and work with you on our next theme…. Busting Industry Myths.
If you still need help with you PSA – post it here on the community wally.
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I love it – quick, powerful and needed. I read and process VERY quickly so it was ok for me… but I can see how it might be “too fast” for others to keep up with.