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Here is my draft. Feedback welcome! Also wondering if I should include a photo in the Facebook post. Is this too long? Thanks!
Dog Moms! Does your dog bark excessively or lunge when you are on a walk?
If this is you, you have probably learned to be on alert so you can be prepared to intervene or prevent this behavior. This makes sense when…Read More
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Thank you, I think I will play with some wording and add that idea! Often that is a new thing to think about for people.
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Possible hooks:
*3 reasons you’re losing out on dances at festivals
* why your embrace could be costing you dances
*why you feel uncomfortable in your embraces
*want to improve your social dance connection and get more dances?
*from chaos to clarity in your embrace
*from ho-hum to orgasmic in your social dancing
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I like all of these, I would change “want to improve…” to “how to improve…”
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got it – thank you
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This is my favorite: *want to improve your social dance connection and get more dances? You are focusing on those who already dance, right?
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great – thank you and yes
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Hi Daniela, I’m new so take my comments w/ a grain of salt. Personally, I don’t know what embrace means in that context. I definitely know what the last entry means…”Stop getting stepped on!” I don’t know what social dances mean? I’m guessing that your target audience knows exactly what that means? Does that mean going to dance clubs and getting…Read More
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thank you
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Hi Blair, I was on the 12pm EST call w/ you this morning. I’m totally new so take my comments w/ a grain of salt. As I read this I almost giggled because I didn’t think that dogs were that in tune with us and can sense our energy on a walk. Wondering, if other people might feel that way when reading your post. You have such great tips and insight…Read More