Well I totally agree with your hook statement —

Jessica I’ll read the rest later, but like Amy says, YOUR HOOK ROOOOOCCCCCKKKKKKSSSSSS!!!!!!

Hi Jessica, do you have a specific client example that you can include to illustrate/show proof? Would love to see it! Or if using your general example of public speaking, I was wondering, “How?” … would hypnosis help me move past it whereas talk therapy doesn’t?

Hi Jessica, lots of good stuff in here. If you don’t want to take on all the therapists you know, consider qualifying your statement “Talk therapy often SUCKS at solving your problems.”
-you could make it about you. “Talk therapy sucked at solving my problems”.
-Or a mixed alternative might be “Talk therapy sucked at solving my problems. How about you?”
For 20 years, Week after week, I went in, re-hashed past trauma, and trying to work out some logical explanation. The process is supposed to be cathartic, and the logical answer is supposed to release you from the issues, BUT what actually happens is it makes them stronger. And I know too many damned people who have the same experience with talk therapy.
You don’t water weeds to make them go away (or choose your own analogy) Repeating traumatic events reinforces them in your brain, and they are incorporated even more deeply into your thoughts, habits, and personality. The result: you get worse, not better.

Jumping right into Shift Hypnosis feels a bit like a sales pitch. I might give the benefits, and then name it later.

Here is a thought that may be a bit controversial. In terms of naming things, used to be some people advocate against words that sound similar to a negative word. “Discuss” for some can sound similar to “disgust”, “shift” has some potential for risk in this arena. How much of an issue this truly is, Maybe it’s nothing. I have no idea. I would be curious to hear other peoples’ opinions.

Whoa! I felt that intro – a nice gut punch and I like it. Very well written, I’m clear on your stance though I’d love more clarity (or more detail) around your method – or more about the shift process of a client’s experience. You come out with a knock out and then it gets soft around the area that lets me know why I shouldn’t bother with talk therapy. Something that makes that AHA moment. Hope that helps!!

The latter part, talking about what you do is good, but for me, perhaps too generic. I’m not sure, fully how to describe what I’m looking for. So, please forgive me, I’m going to write my version of what I would say, and hopefully, that will spark some ideas.
“Don’t worry, there is an answer.
The way to break free is to put your brain where you want to go using hypnosis. Imagine for a moment, instead of getting sucked into your moment of trauma or challenge, you could see it in front of you like a recording. Imagine you were the director, the cinematographer, the special effects person, and you could make any change to the recording you want. You could change the colors, the sounds, the feelings. Imagine you could add a new feeling of confidence, love, support, or something even better. You could bestow some words of wisdom on that younger you, or show them all the things they are going to accomplish in the future. The Shift Hypnosis Method gives you that new experience and fully customizes, exactly fitting to you so it penetrates at a subconscious level and your brain reads the new experience as if it actually happened. The results are mind-blowing.”