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Is there a way to friend the whole group?I can’t seem to tag anyone?
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My Industry Myths….Do my facts make sense?
Myth: If you could just eat less and exercise more it would solve all your body blues!Let me clarify; I say ‘blues” because it’s time we stop saying our body has a “problem” or is “broken”
Fact: Our thoughts are the strongest part of our body system. When your thoughts are about how you are b…Read More
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This is awesome! Be sure to post as a written post AND then do a video on the same content. Let’s see which performs better.
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Hi Amy C, this is really strong. My favorite fact, followed by your CTA are genius. Of the Facts, the 90% for me was the strongest. I would consider moving that into 1st FACT position. And move the thoughts to the bottom or somewhere below. I have a minor disconnect with the title, I feel like either. the “all” should come out or “blues” becomes…Read More
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I finally did a FB Live of my PSA. In my determination to get it done, I forgot my microphone. Well, here it is: https://www.facebook.com/LearnGermanThroughArt/videos/555911942613599. Not perfect, but done.
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Hi Kerstin, I liked your video. The last part about practicing with a partner and the cultural aspects felt the strongest. Maybe an example here or elsewhere would have been a nice add, but a very good job regardless.
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PSA 3 – I re-recorded this because I realized that I default to a tendency to educate/explain vs. activate/attract and engage. It is an important lesson for me to remember. Also ruminating on your feedback to turn the heat up; e.g., is there a more ‘appropriate’ way to do this on Linkedin vs. FB? (Never got a Twitter account — sounds to me like a…Read More
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Good job on lessening the educate/explain and pivoting more toward activate/attract/engage. You are great on video. I looked at the whole post on LI – there are so many calls to action in the text I actually didnt’ know what to do. When you look back at that post, can you see it now that I have mentioned it? If you were to post this video again -…Read More
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Hi Nancy! Sorry for my late reply here. I watched both the takes, the one on YouTube and Linked In. Great job!! The copy is nice and tight, and I feel like it will resonate with your target audience. When I watched the youtube video, I sped it up to 1.25, and felt like that helped the flow and increased the “pep”, but of course the pauses…Read More
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Hi Nancy, Sorry for my late reply as well. You are getting better, and I’m going to echo Jessica’s thoughts on some of the pacing. And there are really brilliant places in this video like “the Kick-Ass Lotus Blossom Club” and when you talk about your client & your father hanging up the phone These are wonderful examples of where your tonality &…Read More
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Hi Nancy. The playbook is the same every single month. 😉 Go to The Starter Kit Section (https://contentpersonalityclub.com/courses/starter/) and you can print them for the rest of the year! Let me know if you have any other questions about this. <3