This my 1st draft from Wednesday’s session. Does it flow and make sense? To wordy? Compelling? Thanks 🙂

Email Subject line-focusing on your body all night?

Hello ,
I am committed to helping you be more body positive by encouraging and providing education around loving yourself fully and unconditionally so that you can focus on living your life to the fullest.

Have you ever been excited to go out with friends, only to feel insecure about the outfit you chose and ended up focusing on your body all night?

How would your life be different if you were comfortable and confident in yourself?
Would you buy the dress of your dreams and wear it?
Would you be able to have a bigger impact in your interactions?
Would you feel confident in booking your great adventure?
Would you spend time and money doing what brings you pleasure, without guilt?

I am here to help you be done letting body image rule your life. This 3 day retreat called Body Image Bootcamp (BIBC), is designed to help you explore YOUR body image, educate YOU on why YOU believe all the negative you do, and empower YOU to take control of your thought processes, thus enabling you to move forward and work towards more important things! 
(you know, like running a successful business, making change in the world, and role modeling positive behavior for your family, your clients, your….)
 
The retreat is $1500.00 and at the conclusion of the weekend, you will have a ton of knowledge to put into practice along with new loving allies and resources to support you on your journey. -LINK INSERTED HERE TO REGISTRATION PAGE-
 
Plus, you get unlimited fall sangria, pumpkin-spiced treats, and a warm inviting atmosphere while it happens.
With Love , Sparkles and Dancing,
Kathy