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HI All- I am so excited to be a part of the group. I found that peer reviews, suggestions and input can be priceless.
Here is what I have come up with after listening to last weeks lesson and being a part of today’s.Please comment on my email tag line is it compelling you to open the email?
Does the story resonate and have impact?
Is my…Read More-
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Can you tie this back to the story? These questions are all very vague (but I do want to say… a good start) I know you can bring this together.
What would you want your photo shoot to include? Is there a theme you like? An outfit that is the bomb? A fantasy look that you want to explore? Reply to this email and share with me. I love to hear and…Read More -
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Really like the subject line, often we shy away from pain. And the story is wonderful. The line that the photo shoot was her reset point really resonated with me. For the first line of the email, perhaps look at how to make the first sentence more about the emotion than the fact that you had a meeting. Shooting in the dark but something like I was…Read More