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After our session today I basically scrapped my 1st email. Thank you Shannon for getting real on beliefs! I was trying to call BS but part of the BS is using language I don’t like, makes me cringe and is counter to what I want to promote… So here is another draft 🙂
I really dislike the word sexy. Although I am in an industry that uses it…Read More
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Thanks Amy!
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Have you used it anywhere?
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I emailed out last week & did FB post today
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HI All- Here is my second BS email. I am trying to get a nice bank of them. Is the BS a strong enough? and my reply coherent?
**Photographers promise to edit your pictures so that you look like a supermodelDo you want your pictures to look like you or Cindy Crawford? Cindy is one of a kind and looks like Cindy. I believe that you deserve to…Read More
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Here is my first try at BS debunking- As always my first question does it make sense? To much, not enough???
Subject line-Pics have to be sexy
Hello….,
You don’t need to know how to look sexy. Practice your smile or pouty face and be flawless. I believe that everyone has different ideas of what sexy is and I want you to be c…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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First line… you don’t need to know how to look sexy… for what. or why.
remove: Practice your smile or pouty face and be flawless.-
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Got it, Thanks 🙂
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Next draft- Any and all feedback is SO helpfull before I release it into the world 🙂
Hello ,
I am committed to helping you be more body positive by encouraging and providing education around loving yourself fully and unconditionally so that you can focus on living your life to the fullest.Have you ever been excited to go out with friends,…Read More
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Good, you are keeping this all on theme…. but I was confused by this line
(you know, like running a successful business, making change in the world, and being a positive role model)-
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Thanks 🙂
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This my 1st draft from Wednesday’s session. Does it flow and make sense? To wordy? Compelling? Thanks 🙂
Email Subject line-focusing on your body all night?
Hello ,
I am committed to helping you be more body positive by encouraging and providing education around loving yourself fully and unconditionally so that you can focus on living your…Read More2 Comments-
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This is the theme… only to feel insecure about the outfit you chose
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Thanks, I will consider other questions or modify my theme some.
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love that you went a level deeper!! I can FEEL this from your heart. Please send this and post it so we can talk next steps on Wednesday. Good work!