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KerstinPeters is with Karen Joy Fritz
I went live once everyone was out of the house, and then the phone rings and distracts me. Here is my myths FB Live: https://fb.watch/d3QNRURq3O/.
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I think I have my next hook/title: Payment Plans are for Pussies!
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Hmmm. I’m curious what the general outline of your content is. Honestly, it feels a bit harsh to me, and I’m not a person who needs payment plans…it is a turn off for me, but may have redeeming value with the content. Certainly gets the attention!! Much love!!
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LOL I know I am still playing with it. feels a little too much “click bait” but I have been leaning into being bolder (as I am a VERY bold personality) the content is Payment plans are fine if you use them for the right reasons. But NOT if you are using them as a sales tactic to get interest. About knowing and owning your value!
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Happy Saturday all!! I have posted my video on FB and LI. I would greatly appreciate it if you would take a moment and show it some love in one of those.…Read More
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Love the video. Really like to brick wall background!!!
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Thank you, Tracy the image is part of my “poster”
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Ok, so taking action and would love feedback @nancychen1gmail-com, @brhwcoachinggmail-com, @amymshannonhernandez-com… Thanks
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I love it – quick, powerful and needed. I read and process VERY quickly so it was ok for me… but I can see how it might be “too fast” for others to keep up with.
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I totally couldn’t keep up with the words. But, the messaging is very powerful.
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I slowed it down to .75 and it was really easy.
Also, the crash sound effect is too early. Hold it for when you put the 40% fact on the screen.
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Thanks! very helpful… adjustments will be made and posted today!!
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Thank you @aslcivicagmail-com, love the feedback!
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Malinda, this is really good. Possible small considerations for tweaking. I’m with Amy H on the timing of the Breaking Glass. Although I might go further, and right after you shatter the glass, I would consider changing the language to 40% of trafficking is Male. You’ve shattered the glass for the reveal, For me, the extra panel to get “Male” did…Read More
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Thanks, Joel, I have been on the search for a GIF that would work for that exact spot… no luck yet though =(. I may post without it and then on the next one add that!
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nothing on giphy. Too bad. If it’s important, I wonder what it would cost on Fivver or some other place to make. Good Luck!
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Nice multimedia piece, Malida! What if you start with”Myth: Sex trafficking is a girls……” then “Fact: it’s a boys ,…” because the word ‘Myth’ might keep me reading, whereas I may not otherwise ( I already know trafficking is a girl issue). Also the end, how about a quick phrase about what your #film is raising $$ for (a doc on ….. X% goes…Read More
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Thank you for the feedback… more videos to come!
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Great job, loved this and very emotive and powerful!
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Thanks, Nancy!!
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Myth: German is a Challenging Language to Learn
Fact 1:
Every letter and letter combination has a distinct sound. You usually pronounce German words the same way you spell them phonetically. Therefore, pronunciation is easy once you have mastered the alphabet.Fact 2:
Learning German is easy – especially for English speakers. Both…Read More5 Comments-
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Hi Kerstin, This is very simple and clear. I would consider opening w/ Fact 2, and moving Fact 1 down, German is easy. For Fact 3, you might consider taking out that grammar is the hard part and stay w/ logical. And I would switch the last sentence around to emphasis, you can start speaking w/ others, even w/o perfect grammar. I think it makes a…Read More
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Thank you, Joel. It is great to have another person look over your content and give feedback. I really appreciate it.
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You are welcome!
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Hi Kerstin, what if you try to shorten and simplify each Fact so that a 12-year old can understand it quickly — that’s the average reading comprehension of us here in the US anyway. Perhaps a version that is less academic/intellectual may be more powerful and to the point?
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Thank you NancyChen for your feedback. Definitely something to consider.
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