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PSA:
There’s nothing wrong with you. Not your story to own.
Being idle, having an off day, not feeling it, uncertainty…doesn’t mean you have a problem or there’s something wrong with you.
Not obtaining something like money in a short period of time doesn’t mean you have a money issue.
A kink in the hose doesn’t mean the hose is b…Read More
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A few thoughts. In the opening. I’m not sure about “Not your story to own”. It was a little confusing to me. Maybe this could be stated a different way. It felt may too condensed a statement or too much shorthand for this opening thought.
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I would consider taking this paragraph, “The energy of your words and thoughts matter a lot. The story you’re telling yourself matters a lot. The story that people are feeding you by preying on your pain, matters a lot. Rather than finding fault with yourself, rather than having someone convince you that you have a productivity problem, see this a…Read More
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Last thought for the moment, I am wondering in the CTA, if “vision” is the right word. For me, it doesn’t quite feel like that what’s you’ve been evoking with the rest of the your language. It is a wonderful word, and I can easily see you using it. Yet, for this copy, I’m thinking there might be something that fits better.
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Absolutely, will definitely play around with it and make sure it has a better flow. Thank you 🙂
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Thanks for all the wonderful feedback and points Joel!! Very much appreciated 🙂
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Hi Nancy J, I loved “A Kink in the Hose Doesn’t Mean the Hose is Broken” so much, it could be the title! I sense that the bridge of your client’s transformation journey may be from Point A, where the client feels broken, to outcome Point B: “So if you’d like to gain clarity and direction to get out of your way, and back to your (true?) vision”. I…Read More
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Great point Nancy!!! And yes, I think that’s a better way to start it out – sort of an attention grabber. Most appreciative of your feedback!!
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Great feedback from @nancychen1gmail-com and @bodymindhypnoticgmail-com.
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Hey Amy, I think I broke my ability to post (tried to upload a video). Would you post this on our community wall for me? And can I get my posting power back? Thanks.
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Here’s my PSA#1 Video. Let’s see if it works. Thanks for feedback.
“Who Says Asian Women Leaders Have Nothing to Complain About?” : https://youtu.be/Xk2ewiJ5kA4
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Hi again, Nancy. here’s my PSA #2 Video. Would love your feedback when you get a chance; Thanks!!! https://www.linkedin.com/feed/update/urn:li:activity:6924058865529475072/
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I loved this! Great job 🙂 It was a great blend of overall facts with current truth and beyond. Until there’s true awareness around what you share, there will continue to be what people believe based on very old information. I think it’s important to also convey in some message that there’s so much more to Asian women then just the being smart and…Read More
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Hi everyone! I’m excited to get to know everyone better 🙂 I’m Nancy and I live in Oregon. I’m a Live/In-Person Content Personality (much to my chagrin – but it makes sense). I’m an Energy Embodiment, Healing, and Purpose Realignment Coach for Visionary Soulpreneurs…however I guess I’ll need to learn how to niche that down or word it differently.
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HI Nancy! I am based in Oregon too! When I am here in the state I go between Beaverton and Oregon City. Where are you?
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Nancy Jackson
Energy Embodiment, Healing, and Purpose Realignment for Visionary Soulpreneurs
Fine-tune the energetic flow around your life + business to amplify your authentic potential, purpose, and presence.
Nancy, I really like this. I think it is very, very strong, overall.