Hey Dan! Because your brand is BADASSITY I was expecting some big bold language in the copy that really stood out. I personally got distracted by the taps in the heading that made me wanted to click away from the lead magnet. I would remove them for your lead magnet. I would break the initial messaging up to something like this: Calling All Bad…Read More

What if you shortened the headline from “Hello, coaches and transformational leaders.
Are your personal brand images commanding attention, building connection, and winning you new clients?” to:

Your coaching can transform lives.
But are your personal brand images commanding attention and building connection to win you new clients?

the first…Read More

@danbadassity-com I like this version so much better than the first. The way you added your color to each slide gave it more visual appeal for me (I’m a visual content person). I am LOVING the way that you broke down the assessment into the colored boxes. It makes it hard to miss. ANd the Name It – Frame It- Play It- slide feels much more on brand…Read More

When I click your download link it takes me to the success page

Hi @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com I think this email is fine. I love getting these types of emails because oftentimes I click on something and get distracted and forget about it. I’m not sure what your content personality is but if it’s video or audio i think adding a personal video answering common FAQs (this will save the time of…Read More

I always wondered how to send these emails. Thanks for sharing, email looks good!