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Hello All-
This is a my live for my website. I will edit for publishing after feedback. Please listen for content from the juicy burger exercise. This will go on my landing page. Does this sell?
Thank you!
PS_ the very last clip was an error so it will be deleted.
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This is a great video. Lots of good content & anyone can feel the caring & support coming from you.
For me, I think some of your pace & rhythm in different parts of your delivery were similar. It made it a little confusing. Some of the transitions to different elements ended up seeming a little quick or just a tiny bit awkward for me.
Text boxes (headers) might help make things clearer & more distinct.
@1:25- I didn’t hear you clearly say, “here are what others are saying” (totally my error).
I think it would be really useful if you put in text blocks like for “here are what others are saying”, & testimonials 1, 2, & 3. Maybe even a 1st name.Other possible text boxes (headers) to add emphasis:
-Eviidence-based
-Absolute Confidentiality
-Trust the Process
-8 week program
-No recordings
-Investment – $750
-What will it cost if you Dont resolve grief
-You are not broken
-Your broken heart can mend
-Schedule a discovery call to learn moreYou might also want to use some of these as headers/sub-headers on your landing or sales pages.
Beautiful video!
Great job! Your compassion and empathy is totally flowing through – at the end especially.