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    TracyDowning

    10 months ago

    Hello All-

    This is a my live for my website. I will edit for publishing after feedback. Please listen for content from the juicy burger exercise. This will go on my landing page. Does this sell?

    Thank you!

    PS_ the very last clip was an error so it will be deleted.

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    • Great job! Your compassion and empathy is totally flowing through – at the end especially.

    • This is really good. Wow, how much clearer you are in such a short time. I can feel your confidence ❤️

    • This is a great video. Lots of good content & anyone can feel the caring & support coming from you.
      For me, I think some of your pace & rhythm in different parts of your delivery were similar. It made it a little confusing. Some of the transitions to different elements ended up seeming a little quick or just a tiny bit awkward for me.
      Text boxes (headers) might help make things clearer & more distinct.
      @1:25- I didn’t hear you clearly say, “here are what others are saying” (totally my error).
      I think it would be really useful if you put in text blocks like for “here are what others are saying”, & testimonials 1, 2, & 3. Maybe even a 1st name.

      Other possible text boxes (headers) to add emphasis:
      -Eviidence-based
      -Absolute Confidentiality
      -Trust the Process
      -8 week program
      -No recordings
      -Investment – $750
      -What will it cost if you Dont resolve grief
      -You are not broken
      -Your broken heart can mend
      -Schedule a discovery call to learn more

      You might also want to use some of these as headers/sub-headers on your landing or sales pages.
      Beautiful video!

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