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Here is my first try at BS debunking- As always my first question does it make sense? To much, not enough???
Subject line-Pics have to be sexy
Hello….,
You don’t need to know how to look sexy. Practice your smile or pouty face and be flawless. I believe that everyone has different ideas of what sexy is and I want you to be c…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Got it, Thanks 🙂
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![Profile picture of AmyHager]()
Welcome!!!!
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Thanks. Happy to be here.
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Here are my 4 Emails – would love feedback.
My ideal clients are overwhelmed, energetically depleted changemakers (think social change/social justice warriors) who want to feel grounded, validated, clarity of next steps, and peace of mind. I’m offering an Ease & Energy call as the entry point of conversation.(Problem 1) Subject: Are you…Read More
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can you make this line a little clearer? * You believe who you were is who you are, discounting your very real lived experiences.
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Not sure how I could say this any clearer. Do you have any suggestions?
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took me a few days. (I am not sure I can get this done to one line and I also feel like you might be able to use your clients words to say this better) You have discounted all your very real life experience and you are living in the past. You identify who you WERE and not who you have become because of your amazing life experiences
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Hey Amy… thanks for this. Okay… using their very real words, would something like this work?
You believe who you’ve been is who you will always be, discounting who you are becoming.
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There you go!
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Can you say this in a way your clients are saying it. I don’t know that they would say “I am using someone else framework and it isn’t working” * You’re outsourcing your wisdom to someone else’s framework.
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How about this: “You believe someone else knows what is best for you and your business.”
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![Profile picture of AmyHager]()
yes!!!
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I finally have my Checklist Assessment DONE!
http://www.membershipsthatsell.com/checklist
WHEW… it took some time as I needed to work on the content pieces for the nurture sequence. So far I have received some good feedback!
I would love your feedback everyone 😀
Thank you in advance!
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WHOA! I jsut went thru your content AND I WAS EXCITED to get my list — this is OUTSTANDING
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you REALLY got it goin on!!!!!! we need a cuppa virtual coffee xo
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@vdrake123gmail-com email newsletter went out. would love your feedback 😀 thank you again!
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![Profile picture of ReeJade]()
@vdrake123gmail-com thank you VEEEEEEE!!!!! This makes me happy ! And I agree! Thank you for going through it for me.
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I would love to see/hear how you planned/plan your content for your newsletter – Im on you list 🙂
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![Profile picture of ReeJade]()
@vdrake123gmail-com what I did was take my membership framework, which is 6 steps and i break it down into bite size weekly content. I focus on each step for 2 months=12 months of content. I format it like this (1) Something personal about me – i always want to relate in my emails (2) a bite size membership strategy and execution plan (3) a member…Read More
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That is a brilliant idea ReeJade!
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thank you! it’s easy for me to see where people are stuck and where people unsubscribe at.
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![Profile picture of AmyHager]()
Good flow! Congrats on getting this done. You knocked it out of the park!
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thank you!
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Nice assessment, Reejade! Really thorough and organized in easy-to-understand chunks. I had two thoughts:
Your title – Without context, I didn’t know what kind of membership you were talking about until you introduced yourself as someone who’s experienced in online communities. Feels to me like the title needs some kind of qualifier, like…Read More-
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@danbadassity-com you are amazing! thank you for taking the time to go through and giving me your perspective as someone who doesn’t know anything about me. I will make these changes!
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I just downloaded this and it looks lovely and is very detailed. Like what Dan said, I didn’t realise it was memberships for communities, and that would have pulled me in faster because I’m looking to increase the membership in my community. So adding that clarity to the title might be helpful. Just a technical note, I am receiving the emails…Read More
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Hi thank you ! Can you explain the clarity in the titile because it says membership growth . I’m not really understanding the disconnect . What would be a title that made you understand. You and Dan are the only 2 people who said they didn’t get it. Also the scoring has instructions. If it is a yes you put a 1 . If it is a no you out 0. And…Read More
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For the title, I think if I had read something like grow your Community Membership it would have been direct. Membership on its own could have been membership to a club, a mastermind, business subscription memberships. Each email I received twice, the one delivering the checklist and the follow up email with the mini-trainings I received twice…Read More
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Awww! Thank you ! I see your description of what you think a membership is is not what I teach and so many people get it confused on what a membership is . It’s community . Some people call course and club membership and that’s just not true. I will add some language in there to speak to whay a membership is and I can a explanation video on the…Read More
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Whitney Doherty
Consultant & Coach
At my core, I am a creative problem solver, master connector and expansive thinker who works at the intersection of business development, strategy and scale. I love supporting founders with larger visions, accountability and championing dreams. I'm developing a program I currently call Dream Leader aimed at teasing out those quelled dreams and bringing them to life.
First line… you don’t need to know how to look sexy… for what. or why.
remove: Practice your smile or pouty face and be flawless.