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Sorry I couldn’t make it live, was on a flight. Watching the recording just now. Hope will see more engagement on this Community Wall 🤗

@clientsmshannonhernandez-com Shannon I’m just curious did you use ChatGPT to draft the sample email that is in the messaging guide for February 2025? I ask because it sounds a little different to how you write and also sounds a little like ChatGPT, because it sounds like how some of my emails come out when I ask ChatGPT to help me refine my draft…Read More

Sure! Here’s my Instagram and LinkedIn posts:
https://www.instagram.com/share/reel/_yplay5VU

https://www.linkedin.com/feed/update/urn:li:activity:7288088135949819905/

Anyone else?

I think you did a good job of fleshing this out just a bit to make the thread from your story to theirs be easy to follow. My only suggestion is that you use the word polished twice close together, and I suggest finding a synonym for one of them.

I think you did a good job here and it flows well. I am not sure of the word bespoke as it’s not a common word, but maybe it is in your area of expertise. I would just make sure it’s a word your audience would relate to.

Nice one Kim!! A great read and a nice flow.

For me I feel like maybe there’s a bit of repetition here: in “By day, I was an attorney (and later a nonprofit executive). The suit, the heels, and the polished words …” and the third paragraph “At work, I was the polished professional, constantly proving myself …” Maybe consider putting them…Read More

Thanks @fancyfamilyphotokeeper-com @annettepresleyhotmail-com and @jaini-shah15gmail-com – I’ve taken all of those notes into consideration and have updated my copy. It will be going out on Tuesday as part of the launch for my new program. I appreciate your help!

I like that you put the ‘woo” into it 🙂 other comments I would make have already been said above. This is a fantastic email.

Hey Kathy! I feel like there’s more than one email here. The excitement (new year, ski races, being in the studio). The managerial outcomes/goals feels like something else. What would it be like to stay with the excitement as the vibe for this email? Maybe tell us more about the joy, fear, excitement, danger of the ski racing. What’s it been like…Read More

I agree with Kim. I don’t follow a thread from the ski experiences to your past jobs to what you do now. I think this is a good start and it just needs to be fleshed out more so that A leads to B leads to C.

Ditto. The title makes me feel like the message is going to be about the desire to travel without a plan or explore just because or something like that, or with the skiing, I think of wanderlust as a skier being on the top of a mountain just to go where the snow leads kind of thing, not being in a race where you have to follow a certain path, so…Read More

I agree with what’s been said above. I think there are 2 emails here. I absolutely love how you have tied the vibe of the skiing races to what you experience in a photo shoot. And perhaps that works when you remove the sentence “As a manager it was my job to look at things from everyone’s point of view and help facilitate the outcomes of the g…Read More