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Annette Presley

• 1 month ago

Here’s my ‘beyond your bio’ email. Any feedback is welcome!

How coming out of a cult…
Led me to think outside the box

Did you know I grew up in a cult that God changed from the top down (so the cult doesn’t exist anymore), and coming out gave me the ability to make connections that can help people heal faster?

Losing my religion was one…Read More

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- KathyTarbell
  1 month ago
  
  Annette- this is great! I was with you util this sentence; If you are tired of feeling like crap, being gaslit by your doctor, and being told nothing is wrong with you because your labs are normal, let’s talk. Maybe something like if you have unanswered questions, are not being heard, feel like there are more options than what have been d…Read More
  - Annette Presley
    1 month ago
    
    Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! I feel like I’m damned if I do and damned if I don’t. Most women I run into really resonate with the feeling like crap and gaslighting, but there are some who don’t. So, lol, I guess I will just have to decide which group I want to work with. Maybe I can alternate my approach, but I don’t know if that’s…Read More
- Fancy Ruff-Wagner
  1 month ago
  
  I agree with Kathy. I love it all – except that part just felt a little too on the nose. As someone with a lifelong chronic medical condition that was only diagnosed 8 years ago, I had many caring doctors who didn’t know what to do with me. They just didn’t have the information. Maybe you can acknowledge both situations so that someone doesn’t…Read More
  - Annette Presley
    1 month ago
    
    Okay, that I can incorporate, I think. Thanks!
- Jaini Shah
  4 weeks, 1 day ago
  
  The first part of your email is great, captivating story and helps a reader understand how you have an open mind. I’m finding it hard to relate the sentence “If you are tired of feeling like crap, being gaslit by your doctor, and being told nothing is wrong with you because your labs are normal, let’s talk.” to everything else you have said in y…Read More
AmyHager

• 1 month, 1 week ago

Ok gang, Look at the Calendar- we updated to remove Maria’s Tech Q&A from the 25th 🤦‍♀️ Thank you for catching that. We extended the 3rd week by 30 mins to include time for Maria’s tech session.

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Jaini Shah

• 1 month, 1 week ago

Hello everyone! I liked the open session yesterday where we got to share feedback. So here’s me tagging all those who said yes to having a pod or supporting each other. @circle270mediagmail-com @hellokimromain-com @kathymthoodphotography-com @wdnyc2014gmail-com

What does support look like for you? Personally, I would love having a time once a…Read More

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- Whitney Doherty
  1 month, 1 week ago
  
  I think your outline sounds like what I had in mind. I’m flexible how it works but do think it makes sense to do it right after class when its fresh – It might be enough to do a meet up 2x a month and the rest via email (google docs)
  - Jaini Shah
    1 month ago
    
    Sounds good! I’d also be up for one or 2 meet ups a month. And with @kathymthoodphotography-com and @hellokimromain-com would a Friday work at 4pm EAT? If time zones don’t work perhaps we share on specific days our work and provide feedback?
    - Kim Romain
      1 month ago
      
      4pm EAT is 8am EST, which would work great on Friday mornings. I know that @wdnyc2014gmail-com was also interested in being a part of this. I’m wondering what it might look like if the 5 of us just committed to giving it a go? Do we want to post here, tag each other and then we can use that time on Fridays as a space to workshop?
      
      Jaini Shah
      1 month ago
      
      Yup that would be great! Happy to start an hour later as well if you want. Lets give it a go on Friday next week? I’ll send out a calendar invite with Zoom link
    - KathyTarbell
      1 month ago
      
      That’ 5 AM for me….. A little to early.
    - Fancy Ruff-Wagner
      1 month ago
      
      And it’s 6AM for me on MST, also too early as that’s when I get up and the first hour is spent feeding and medicating animals.
- KathyTarbell
  1 month, 1 week ago
  
  Hi Jaini- I would love to be in a peer review pod. For me a review of my draft would be best on Friday or Monday after our first meeting of the month. That gives me Wednesday class and after to draft it. A day to let it sit then review and refine so that it is more polished to look at on the next Wednesday class. I would really like to have at…Read More
- Fancy Ruff-Wagner
  1 month, 1 week ago
  
  I would be interested in this as well. I couldn’t attend the session live due to having a root canal extracted, and just went through the replay Sunday evening. Kenya is actually 10 hours ahead of my time zone (MST). But having a dedicated time or at least a group to submit drafts to would go along way for me.
  - Jaini Shah
    1 month ago
    
    Yes I think knowing who we can tag here would help in having a committed peer group to work with
Jaini Shah

• 1 month, 2 weeks ago

Email #4 for my nurture sequence. Do you connect with the story and the points?

Hey, FNAME!
A few months ago, I was on holiday in Istanbul, Turkey and everything that could go wrong WENT wrong.
I got a serious sugar craving and ate a fully processed sugar, gluten and cream loaded baklava – which was kind of unusual considering the number o…Read More

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- Jaini Shah
  1 month, 2 weeks ago
  
  @amymshannonhernandez-com and @clientsmshannonhernandez-com tagging you as it’s really quiet here in the forum and would love to get momentum on this and get my welcome sequence out. So please share your feedback as we wait for community members
  - AmyHager
    1 month, 2 weeks ago
    
    Hi Jaini. Thank you for your message.
    
    The Club wall is set up for peer to peer review, and we encourage you to tag 2 or 3 of your peers when you post asking for feedback. This will hopefully get their attention and get conversations going.
    
    As you can imagine, Shannon and I do not review every single posted content in this program, as that is…Read More
- Whitney Doherty
  1 month, 1 week ago
  
  I liked this a lot Jaini and think it’s quite clear – both the connecting with audience and your invitation for a discovery call. Sorry it’s so quite here – I admit, I forget to log on. Feel free to reach out directly if you want some feedback – wdnyc2014@gmail.com
  - Jaini Shah
    1 month, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks Whitney!
- Annette Presley
  1 month ago
  
  I like this, it’s very relatable. I think this sentence needs a little reworking and learnt should be learned. “I learnt so much about my big feelings that I was holding in as soon as I shared them with my husband, it reminded me the power of talking out loud.”
  - Jaini Shah
    1 month ago
    
    Thanks Annette! Any suggestions on what needs reworking in the sentence?
    - Annette Presley
      1 month ago
      
      I think I’d add another point to the what you can do section about sharing your big feelings with someone and skip the ‘to wrap up’ sentence and the ‘I learned so much’ sentence.
Jaini Shah

• 1 month, 3 weeks ago

Would love your comments on this Email #3 for my nurture sequence. Does this sound inviting and speaking to someone you know?

Hello, I’m dropping in again, FNAME.

I love all things mindful eating, empowering transformation, and creating vibrant, joyful lives. But I also know that finding balance, breaking old habits, and stepping into a h…Read More
KathyTarbell

• 1 month, 3 weeks ago

Okay so I really was at a loss on our last Zoom. I am the definition of giving an awkward introduction. It’s time to change that up 🙂 I asked past/future clients in my FB group for help and this is what we came up with. Let me know if you can see yourself or a friend. Any suggestions on tweaking it are appreciated!

My name is Kathy and I am a…Read More

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- Jaini Shah
  1 month, 3 weeks ago
  
  Hi Kathy! It’s great you went and asked your clients, because they are the ones you want to speak out to, so using their language is helpful. I feel the statement lacks a little bit of emotion, though I could see someone who could be your client (me!). Perhaps just a couple of change in words like embrace their inner beauty, their true essence and…Read More
  - AmyHager
    1 month, 2 weeks ago
    
    Great advice, Jaini! Kathy, remember… this statement will grow and flow as you do. What you have is better than what you first said last week when we were practicing.
  - KathyTarbell
    1 month, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks ladies! Jaini your input is always so helpful! The key is probably to introduce myself more so it sounds more natural 🙂
- Whitney Doherty
  1 month, 1 week ago
  
  Kathy – can you put a photo in your profile? It helps us remember who one another is from class. I agree- the more you practice it, the better the info will sound (in that natural way)
Jennifer Jane Young

• 1 month, 3 weeks ago

Hi everyone. I’ve already sent out my email for this week as I was super inspired by Shannon today in the Office Hours. I decided to create my own small pond to be the big fish in, in a Facebook group called Say Yes to Your Next YES: https://www.facebook.com/groups/sayyestoyouryescommunity

So today’s email is unpacking the myth that we need…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 month, 3 weeks ago
  
  This is a deeper strategy convo, which isn’t something we can do here on the Wall. But… what I love is you are trying to connect deeper with your people. Please report back to let us know how this experiment went! I saw the Yes to your next YES post and I think you are doing much better at going deeper with your content.
Jaini Shah

• 2 months ago

Following yesterday’s call here’s a draft of the email I’d like to send out. Let me know if it’s catchy and if you get the point?

Subject line: Don’t Invite the Holiday Weight
Preview: Have fun on holiday!

Hook: Say goodbye to the holiday weight – or just don’t invite it in the first place!
Sound too good to be true?

Here’s the thing,…Read More

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- Jennifer Jane Young
  1 month, 3 weeks ago
  
  Hey @jaini-shah15gmail-com, I love this email because it is a huge struggle for everyone. I would be more tempted to open the email if it had a catchy title like “Escape the holiday hangovers and turkey dinner syndrome” and as a sub title “Do this instead” or something around those lines.
  
  I would have this sentence right at the top. That would…Read More
  - Jaini Shah
    1 month, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks @jenniferjenniferjaneyoung-com! Oh my gosh, great idea on using the questions in social media for engagement. I will add that to my Instagram ideas to action!
- AmyHager
  1 month, 3 weeks ago
  
  I see you having fun playing with this theme. I can’t wait to see what results you have had in our session today 💜
Jennifer Jane Young

• 2 months ago

Hi everyone. Post our call today, I made a video newsletter and added a bit of text to it to give people context. It actually felt so good and easy to just drop this as a video. I think in this way people really get to experience me as a teacher and coach which gives them a preview into what it’s like to work with me.

Email title: Are you too…Read More

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- Jaini Shah
  2 months ago
  
  Really enjoyed the video and felt your message come through so well.
  - Jennifer Jane Young
    1 month, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks @jaini-shah15gmail-com I’m finally feeling like I’m on a roll!!
Lisa Johns

• 2 months, 1 week ago

Are we going to get a template from Wednesday? I know you all are out of the country with not great internet –

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- AmyHager
  2 months ago
  
  Notes are under the recording for Nov. Are you seeing them?
  - Lisa Johns
    2 months ago
    
    I do now – guess I was just too early
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