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ReneeVardouniotis

• 1 year ago

Hi Club Friends!
I just posted my offer, wondering if you all could give me feedback??

PARENTS: I can’t tell you how many people say that they are struggling to help their kids with their confidence and mental wellness. My question to them is: How strong is YOUR mindset foundation?
Having a strong mindset foundation as a parent is crucial t…Read More

5 Comments
- AmyHager
  1 year ago
  
  Is this following the framework from our session or any of the recordings?
  - ReneeVardouniotis
    1 year ago
    
    I thought so? lol I will take another look!
    - AmyHager
      1 year ago
      
      Make sure you make that part of your post. Us the title that is in the training you watched… It helps soo much. Thanks!
      ALso, make sure you go read the two posts below your post and ask any questions that the messaging brings up for you. It is how you will become a better messenger, to read others and see what might be working/or might not be…Read More
- JoelElfman
  1 year ago
  
  HI Renee,
  
  I would consider just using “mindset”, foundation for me just make it longer & confusing.
  
  Seems like “own emotional intelligence, self-care, problem solving skills, resilience, goal setting, compassion, and to build healthy relationships” is a lot. I would cut this down, or break it down to more than one sentence.
  
  I would also conside…Read More
  - ReneeVardouniotis
    1 year ago
    
    Thank you Joel! I appreciate this feedback, very helpful!
KerriKender changed their profile picture

• 1 year ago
KerriKender

• 1 year ago

Here’s my post I created for LinkedIn today….going to reformat it for an email to teacher leaders tomorrow. Any feedback welcomed! (The photo is one that is similar to the one I posted, I just couldn’t find the one without the wording blocking out the image for the purposes of this app post?

📚 Educator burnout is a prevalent issue in our…Read More

5 Comments
- AmyHager
  1 year ago
  
  Is this following a format from the recorded sessions?
  - KerriKender
    1 year ago
    
    Feeling maybe I’m a little lost….I put statistics in the beginning of my message as the symptoms. Maybe that’s not right? Can I put another hook and them curate the message around that. What about if I summed up the statistics to one paragraph?
    - KerriKender
      1 year ago
      
      Let’s honestly reflect, school leaders, have we checked in on our teachers wellness? Teacher turnover, vacancies, stress, and burnout are at an all time high….
      
      KerriKender
      1 year ago
      
      I went based off my notes, trying to paint a picture with my messaging, and then going into the diagnosis. Amy, If you can provide some insight into where I went wrong, would love to modify. Would love to spend 3 hours watching the videos from october, when I have time. I see that one of the meetings in October has meeting notes. Are there…Read More
      
      AmyHager
      1 year ago
      
      Got it, you are following the Symptoms/Diagnosis format. THAT is what we need to know when you ask for Feedback so we can help you with the framework. I wasn’t sure if you watched another video in the portal or where this came come. Make it clear by staying something like “This is my Symptom/Diagnosis post and I plan on using it in an email to my…Read More
Dan Lewis

• 1 year ago

Value Messaging – posting on Linked In and Facebook

No more boring headshots: Three tips for using location for standout personal brand images

Ever go to a coach’s website and see a conventional headshot photographed against a soft, blurry portrait studio backdrop? Of course we all have. It’s often the mark of a so-called “professional”…Read More

4 Comments
- Dan Lewis
  1 year ago
  
  Wow, that image is really big. Feels like the hook needs some love. Right now it’s oriented to avoiding what you don’t want — boring headshots. Maybe orient to what you DO want — like headshots that capture your attention? Either way I really want to position my services as MUST HAVE, not just nice to have. Thoughts?
  - KerriKender
    1 year ago
    
    Hi Dan….Ever go to a coach’s website and see a conventional headshot photographed against a soft, blurry portrait studio backdrop? Of course we all have. It’s often the mark of a so-called “professional” headshot. Is this your hook? I agree with you, to talk about how it’s a must have. When you go on to explain how you like to persona…Read More
- AmyHager
  1 year ago
  
  You LOVE this format, don’t you! I really like this. If you wanted to A/B test this – I would put two images together. 1 of someone in front of the blue fuzzy background (if you have a client that used to have the bad background,, that would be cool to have the same person. I have a fuzzy blue background and outdoor ones that I am happy to donate…Read More
- JoelElfman
  1 year ago
  
  Hi Dan,
  
  Great pic of your client.
  I would consider shortening the title – No more boring headshots: Three tips for using location
  
  What confuses is me you talk about a blurry background, and part of your photo is out of focus. It seems contradictory to me. Plus, I am finding the out-of-focus portion distracting from the beautiful & strong portion…Read More
JoelElfman

• 1 year ago

Revised 01 (parts in Square Brackets [] are for the video & won’t be in the text version) Stop “Shoulding” on Yourself

Do you have a bunch of shoulds or shouldn’ts you keep telling yourself? Something you want to do differently, but haven’t managed to change so far.
– I should exercise, I should lose weight, I should stop smoking, I should…Read More

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3 Comments
- AmyHager
  1 year ago
  
  This is really good! Get it out into the world – we all need to hear this!
- Dan Lewis
  1 year ago
  
  Love it, Joel. Really straightforward and clear.
- JoelElfman
  1 year ago
  
  Thanks AmyH & Dan!
Deirdre Harter & Carmen Reed-Gilkison

• 1 year ago

Hello! We’re posting our Brand Commitment Statements here for feedback:

We are committed to helping women service-based business owners understand their mindset, money, and metrics so that they can build a sustainably profitable business that lights them up.

We are committed to promoting collaboration over competition and relationship…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year ago
  
  Thank you for making it so clear what Framework you followed ❤️ Can you go to two other posts and read people’s messaging and provide comments back? You become a better messenger when you read other’s posts as well. Thank you!!!
  
  I love these! Where will you (or do you) have these posted? Website? Socials?
  
  Small wording suggestion to #2 to help…Read More
JoelElfman

• 1 year ago

Hi everyone,

I would love some commentary. I’ve tried to simplify as much as possible, but it is still running a bit longer than I would like.

Stop “Shoulding” on Yourself

Do you have a bunch of shoulds or shouldn’ts you keep telling yourself? Something you want to do differently, but haven’t managed to change so far. I should exercise,…Read More

2 Comments
- KerriKender
  1 year ago
  
  I like the title “Stop Shoulding on Yourself!” It definitely draws me in…maybe a play on words? We’ve all been there “I should exercise, stop smoking, etc, so I feel this hook helps to keep me engaged. For the three tips, maybe an example of what this sounds like for 1)…..For two, I see you give the example about the client and her son, but…Read More
  - JoelElfman
    1 year ago
    
    Thanks Keri for your feedback – the revised version is a little tighter, and the example for #2 is for the video version. I will record and the decide whether or not to cut it out. Thanks again!
Claire Peltier

• 1 year ago

Bummer I thought I had posted this and it does not show… Reposting it

Value Messaging
How to remain inspired when you want to change your professional life ?
Often time you dream of changing job or creating your own business but it is hard to figure out where to start and if it is the right choice for you, the right timing, hard to put a…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year ago
  
  We did this LIVE on Wed. If you want to see the re-work, it is the last 5 mins of the replay under Value Messaging, session 3
ReeJade

• 1 year ago

Just saying hey everyone! New here. I look forward to meeting everyone.

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CarrieWulf

• 1 year ago

Here is the link to my value…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year ago
  
  We made some suggestions to playfully experiment with the HOOK and image in the 3rd session of Value Messaging. Go back and check out the replay if you want to hear the brainstorm. ❤️ Carrie, update us on if the next version preforms better.
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