Community Forum – Content Personality Club

AmyHager

• 1 year, 2 months ago

All our written Content Personality types. I loved this video and thought many of you could do something similar with our work from this last month. ❤️
https://www.facebook.com/megantuoheyrelationships/videos/3198730023606409/?extid=CL-UNK-UNK-UNK-IOS_GK0T-GK1C&mibextid=2Rb1fB

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MonicaDunnagan

• 1 year, 3 months ago

After six weeks in my Transform your life sessions busy moms will:
*Learn how to shop for healthy food
*Increase confidence in preparing healthier meals
*Say no to box & junk food with ease
*Bring energy back to your daily life

If you are experiencing any of the following, lets have a conversation on how to transform your life and eating…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Great tie back to the 3 results, even though you have 4 symptoms. I am curious if we can think smaller with the word “clients”. Do you help busy moms? Or families? See if you can call out your ideal client a little more (and like we talked about yesterday – you can make small tweaks and use this copy in many places. So, if you work with both busy…Read More
  - MonicaDunnagan
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Updated. Take a look please
DanielaBorgialli

• 1 year, 3 months ago

I’ve caught most of the replay. I promise to go back and comment on others when I have a physical computer – my phone is tiny.
However I wanted to drop this latest assignment as I was a little inspired !
*****

After just 8 weeks in my Argentine tango beginner course students typically experience:
•a greater understanding of the cul…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I don’t think it is bad to post 5. I do like how you have kept these simple. Maybe instead of improve self confidence… a boost in self confidence or confidence on and off the dance floor.
- AmyHager
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Have a good rest of your trip!! ❤️
Brenda Uekert

• 1 year, 3 months ago

UPDATE: I made some edits and posted it to LinkedIn – https://www.linkedin.com/posts/docbku_financialfreedom-moneymanagement-moneyroadtrip-activity-7085096255202197504-Hydi?utm_source=share&utm_medium=member_desktop

By completing our Money Road Trip Workbook and online program, you’ll gain so much:

Clarity in how you want to live your life and…Read More

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- DanielaBorgialli
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Really love this ! It’s cheeky, it’s fun and the “symptoms close to home “ – love that transition .
- MonicaDunnagan
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Love this
- MonicaDunnagan
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I love this
RuthRoland

• 1 year, 3 months ago

After only 3 lessons at the Baton Rouge Conservatory, students typically see these results:
1 – More confidence trying new things (even beyond music)
2 – More ease in hearing and echoing different tunes and rhythms
3 – Increased physical comfort while singing or playing 🫶

If you are currently experiencing any of these symptoms:
1 -…Read More

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- Shannon
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  @ruthviolincox-net love this! I do think that if you said this in line one in first set it would help frame “beyond music”: More confidence trying out new skills and activities (even beyond music). thoughts?
  - RuthRoland
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Yes, wonderful! Trying to keep it succint–does my solution (trying new things) works to encompass skills and activities or just make it sound vague?
Claire Peltier

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Hi all, from my new home ! I went back to the turning points story, which I love, but I am still struggling with it. Amy you mentioned the themes, and I totally agree with the ones you mentioned : not setting the foundations first, and that I do have a bit of a time issues lol (’cause there are so many things to learn ! ). I quite often get to…Read More

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- JoelElfman
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Some of the language felt like it was taking away from the emotional content of a beautiful story. Either there was a bit too much of a set-up or other verbiage that was creating distance of something akin to speaking as a 3rd person/observer.
  (“I was seeing myself drowning…” is very different from ‘I was drowning…’)
  (“I had had that amazing…Read More
  - Claire Peltier
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you Joel for taking the time ! That’s very useful re the wording and being more direct
- RuthRoland
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautiful story! I have a few questions:
  What are the details of the going deeper in your own practice that produced the clear energy shift?
  What do you mean by having found your home? This sounds like a literal, physical home but I don’t see how that connects to the paragraph above.
  
  Either way, more details would help me understand how you got…Read More
  - Claire Peltier
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you Ruth ! Here is what I have re written
    But something was still nagging me, I needed to go deeper in my own practice. During nearly one year I studied other modalities, deepening my inner world : meditation remained part at the center, pendulum dowsing gave me an sound approach to energy clearing and extended details to accompany people…Read More
    - RuthRoland
      1 year, 3 months ago
      
      Better! I would make each phrase after the colon in the second sentence a bullet point. A different solution would be to use a period instead of a colon, then make each phrase its own sentence. The next sentence (energy shift) should be a new paragraph.
      
      Claire Peltier
      1 year, 3 months ago
      
      thanks Ruth! That’s great (and re fewer and less… i get mixed up sometimes ! English is not my mother tongue 😉
      
      RuthRoland
      1 year, 3 months ago
      
      Yeah…we all get mixed up sometimes even those of us who grew up speaking English. It’s confusing!
    - RuthRoland
      1 year, 3 months ago
      
      fewer tools, not less tools: fewer is for lower numbers of things, less is for degrees of states (less hungry, less time)
  - Claire Peltier
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    as for the home part, it is indeed my physical home. I guess if I put it in there, there needs to be a bit more clarity, it is ‘my first’ home, I have been looking for it for 3 years, it is grounding and I feel it will be important in the next steps
    - RuthRoland
      1 year, 3 months ago
      
      Ah, yes! That helps.
BethShenton

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Hi everyone! I’ve been catching up offline on the Turning Point Stories. Here’s mine. (I left in the step by step prompts in this first draft). The photo included is from my first Valentine’s with my husband one million years ago, when he helped lay out a framework for a little joy in our lives. I’d love your comments!…Read More

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- Shannon
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beth – this is beautiful. I love the part about how your studio continues to reflect the values that are important to you. I also love that you ask others to chime in and share what the studio means to them? It is great as is – and if you want to make it even stronger, I suggest outlining 3 values of the studio very clearly, so people don’t have…Read More
  - BethShenton
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you Shannon, will do.
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  HI Beth, Great story & set of twists & turns. I do feel like the emotional content could be turned up a little more.
  - BethShenton
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you Joel, I made some tweaks. Appreciate the feedback.
- BethShenton
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Update: I used this turning point story in a grant application, and I’m a finalist for their top grant award! Kudos to this process – working through this story with Amy, Shannon and feedback received made a huge difference.
- MonicaDunnagan
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautiful!
Claire Peltier

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Hi all, I couldn’t be with you last wednesday, we had a huge thunderstorm and I lost power just before starting. I am travelling to my new home tomorrow so it is another miss… but I be there in July, fro an empty but new home! No time to work on turning points story… that’s how it is.
take care ,
Cx

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- AmyHager
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Have a safe move. We will see you in July and you can always come back to your turning point story ❤️
SafriannaLughna

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Hi everyone. I’ve had my head down and quiet, but trust me when I say I think about you all often. <3

I have been REALLY pulling back while I am mid-transition in careers to honor my own energy and my body, but I miss ya'll!

Here is my Turning Point Story I've drafted for this month's content. I'd love to have your thoughts.…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This is so inviting and told very well! Your messaging has grown so much. Where do you plan on sharing this story knowing you are in a more quiet space?
  - SafriannaLughna
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    I think I’m going to try this on LinkedIn!!! :O
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Brilliant, beautiful story!
Brenda Uekert

• 1 year, 4 months ago

I had to write an Origin Story for my speaker profile. I’m sharing it below. This is more than sufficient for my purposes, and I have no intention of lengthening my story using this month’s template. So I’ll be bowing out of the remainder of this month’s sessions. . . Have fun!

Have you ever felt like you were running on fumes, but didn’t…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This works well for your website and social posts. I do think it lacks emotion. The only emotion is the burnout.
  You mention Joy and simplicity of being on the road, but you haven’t painted a true picture of what that looks like. You are just telling me, which makes it impossible for me to actually see. That last sentence needs more, otherwise…Read More
- RuthRoland
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I like all the travel and adventure language (running on fumes/empty, climb, brink, etc.) I agree with Amy about wanting more details on the sunny side of things.
  
  The second paragraph of your post (starting with “But”) might read “But after 18 months of working from home, I was running on empty. I found myself back where I started, on the brink…Read More
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