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    JoelElfman

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    Here is a rough draft of an article I’m writing. The language needs tightening up for sure. But I was committed to getting it up on the wall today. All suggestions are welcome. I’m thinking of putting it up on LinkedIn and shooting a short video talking about it.

    How Do You Change a Successful Habit?

    I was working w/ a long-time,…Read More

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      Shannon
      1 year, 9 months ago

      Hi Joel! I like the story direction of this! I think you could definitely position your expertise by expanding out on “the work” you did with your client. What was it? Why did you choose that particular modality? What is the maintenance work as the client continues on this journey?

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        JoelElfman
        1 year, 9 months ago

        Thanks Shannon. I’m glad you like the direction. This one was a fun one to write, and hopefully to shoot the video for. I’m still working on how much to share or not about technique & modality, and your guidance is always much appreciated.

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          JoelElfman
          1 year, 9 months ago

          I was just in a networking call, and when I was asked about what’s my ask, what kind of people I wanted to meet, I used a story about this client to say I wanted to meet more people like this, who are finding their successful strategy is hitting some limitations and are looking to create some change.

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    KerstinPeters is with Susanlazar hart and 3 others

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    Does anyone want to meet tomorrow morning at 10:30 AM ET to discuss progress and brainstorm other possibilities of sharing our core values?

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    Brenda Uekert

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    I made a video that includes my “what I do” statement along with my values. It’s on the homepage of my website.

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    JulianneMiller, AFC®

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    Behind the times; I’ve been focusing on TCE.
    Here are a few values to start with some digging deep. I’ll leave it here tonight for any feedback but I do need to review and dig deeper to see how to implement it into the business.
    Thanks for the review!

    Confident- I believe that women should feel confident understanding and managing their money on…Read More

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      AmyHager
      1 year, 9 months ago

      you switch between “we” and “I”. Just wanted to make sure it was intentional.

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      AmyHager
      1 year, 9 months ago

      Being from a small town and living in one now – your trust statement is right fucking on! How you explained Integrity is very kind. I could see where using Sincerity would be better. Instead of relationships do you use community? or People.

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        JulianneMiller, AFC®
        1 year, 9 months ago

        😁 Right?! I do like Sincerity better than Integrity. That’s closer to my heart. I really reflected on relationships over the weekend and connection really hits it for me. It’s not only the people that I meet but the next connection that we forge. Some develop into relationships; all are important at some level.

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        JulianneMiller, AFC®
        1 year, 9 months ago

        But I’ll need to change the definition on that word then. Not all of that will work

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        JulianneMiller, AFC®
        1 year, 9 months ago

        Tell me your thoughts on this updated copy:
        Confident- We believe that women should feel confident in understanding and managing their money on their own terms
        Trust–We believe that relationships are built on trust and not on gossip or false stories
        Sincerity-We believe that we all benefit when we’re honest with ourselves and others about our…Read More

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          RuthRoland
          1 year, 9 months ago

          These sound good to me, Julianne! Is it important to you that most of your sentences don’t have periods on the end? And I wonder whether the list would be even more effective in a different order. Have you played with the ordering of the middle three?

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            JulianneMiller, AFC®
            1 year, 9 months ago

            lol Thanks Ruth, that’s modern vernacular to leave off punctuation (common on social media) but I would normally include the periods. I have not thought about the order; interesting to think about. So I would probably put them in order of the client process then: Trust, Sincerity, Compassion, Confidence, and Connection. I adjusted the words a…Read More

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              RuthRoland
              1 year, 9 months ago

              Yes, that’s a good adjustment for the value words. I like your new order but I also like starting with Confidence because that seems like what your people are looking for and that’s what they’ll see first. In which case you’d be back to your initial order! Sit with both and see what feels right to you. The only thing about the puctuation is when…Read More

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    JoelElfman

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    I’m testing putting my Core Values in my signature line

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      Shannon
      1 year, 9 months ago

      @bodymindhypnoticgmail-com I like it – but it needs way more context than just three words. Maybe what you mean is attach the graphic to the email – I wouldn’t do that. Increases chance of going to spam. But I would copy and paste those three lines and put them below your signature for sure.

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        JoelElfman
        1 year, 9 months ago

        Thanks Shannon, that makes sense. Some people will also download w/o attachments. I will play w/ putting the Core Values in columns underneath.

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      KerstinPeters
      1 year, 9 months ago

      The image is quite big at the end of an email. I would put one core value at the end of your email signature. Then rotate them monthly.

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    KerstinPeters

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    Here is the blog about my first value, Creativity: https://kerstinpeterspaintingblog.blogspot.com/2023/01/creativity-breaks-barriers.html.

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      Shannon
      1 year, 9 months ago

      Hi! Good job with this. I like that you are taking your 5 core values and making them each into an expanded blog post! Smart smart smart!

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    AmyHager

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    bbbbyyyeeeeee! All you lovely people, I will see you after Jan 30th! I am off to a beach and some sun.

    It is so awesome knowing I can go away for a week and that you all have each other’s backs. Keep posting your messaging work from our recorded sessions here on the wall and make sure you go down two posts below you to give your Club friends…Read More

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    AimeeRussell

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    This is my ‘I believe’ post, introducing my new hair service called the OH MY GODDESS.
    Feedback for spelling, grammar and if this is clear or confusing please. Thank you.

    !NEW SERVICE ALERT!

    I believe that we all could use more time to connect with ourselves. To be able to slow down, disconnect from the world, and tap in to our truest…Read More

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      Shannon
      1 year, 9 months ago

      Fuck. I accidently delete @ruthviolincox-net comment – when I was trying to say BRAVO on that feedback. DAMN. Ruth, sorry, do you remember what you wrote? It was spot on!

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      RuthRoland
      1 year, 9 months ago

      Hi Aimee, this is an attempted reconstruction of a previous post. If you already read that one see which of them you like more. The first paragraph is FIRE! The second one starts slow. Instead, how about: “The OH MY GODDESS experience is energy work fused with hair and scalp treatment services. Energy modalities such as Reiki, breathwork, and…Read More

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      DanielaBorgialli
      1 year, 9 months ago

      crap my comments just disappeared !!!
      I love this! and would love to experience the service!!!

      I have a similar suggestion to RuthRoland. Here is my suggestion:
      The second sentence.
      Infusing (my gifts of) energy work with my hair and scalp treatment services it’s called the OH MY GODDESS Experience.

      (like leading into excitement!)
      And in the…Read More

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    JoelElfman

    • 1 year, 9 months ago

    Here is a Core Value video I shot. I thought I could edit in YouTube, so it starts a couple of seconds in. I’m Live/In-Person, so I’m better when I have an actual body in front of me. I think this is a nice start.

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      KerstinPeters
      1 year, 9 months ago

      I love it, Joel. I like that you explain to the viewer the different forms of connection to others and inside themselves. For people who don’t know you, I would add your name and what you do at the beginning of the video. Maybe, you can add this information when you edit the video.

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