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Behind the times; I’ve been focusing on TCE.
Here are a few values to start with some digging deep. I’ll leave it here tonight for any feedback but I do need to review and dig deeper to see how to implement it into the business.
Thanks for the review!Confident- I believe that women should feel confident understanding and managing their money on…Read More
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Being from a small town and living in one now – your trust statement is right fucking on! How you explained Integrity is very kind. I could see where using Sincerity would be better. Instead of relationships do you use community? or People.
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Right?! I do like Sincerity better than Integrity. That’s closer to my heart. I really reflected on relationships over the weekend and connection really hits it for me. It’s not only the people that I meet but the next connection that we forge. Some develop into relationships; all are important at some level.
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Tell me your thoughts on this updated copy:
Confident- We believe that women should feel confident in understanding and managing their money on their own terms
Trust–We believe that relationships are built on trust and not on gossip or false stories
Sincerity-We believe that we all benefit when we’re honest with ourselves and others about our…Read More-
These sound good to me, Julianne! Is it important to you that most of your sentences don’t have periods on the end? And I wonder whether the list would be even more effective in a different order. Have you played with the ordering of the middle three?
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lol Thanks Ruth, that’s modern vernacular to leave off punctuation (common on social media) but I would normally include the periods. I have not thought about the order; interesting to think about. So I would probably put them in order of the client process then: Trust, Sincerity, Compassion, Confidence, and Connection. I adjusted the words a…Read More
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Yes, that’s a good adjustment for the value words. I like your new order but I also like starting with Confidence because that seems like what your people are looking for and that’s what they’ll see first. In which case you’d be back to your initial order! Sit with both and see what feels right to you. The only thing about the puctuation is when…Read More
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@bodymindhypnoticgmail-com I like it – but it needs way more context than just three words. Maybe what you mean is attach the graphic to the email – I wouldn’t do that. Increases chance of going to spam. But I would copy and paste those three lines and put them below your signature for sure.
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Here is the blog about my first value, Creativity: https://kerstinpeterspaintingblog.blogspot.com/2023/01/creativity-breaks-barriers.html.
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bbbbyyyeeeeee! All you lovely people, I will see you after Jan 30th! I am off to a beach and some sun.
It is so awesome knowing I can go away for a week and that you all have each other’s backs. Keep posting your messaging work from our recorded sessions here on the wall and make sure you go down two posts below you to give your Club friends…Read More
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This is my ‘I believe’ post, introducing my new hair service called the OH MY GODDESS.
Feedback for spelling, grammar and if this is clear or confusing please. Thank you.!NEW SERVICE ALERT!
I believe that we all could use more time to connect with ourselves. To be able to slow down, disconnect from the world, and tap in to our truest…Read More
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Fuck. I accidently delete @ruthviolincox-net comment – when I was trying to say BRAVO on that feedback. DAMN. Ruth, sorry, do you remember what you wrote? It was spot on!
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Hi Aimee, this is an attempted reconstruction of a previous post. If you already read that one see which of them you like more. The first paragraph is FIRE! The second one starts slow. Instead, how about: “The OH MY GODDESS experience is energy work fused with hair and scalp treatment services. Energy modalities such as Reiki, breathwork, and…Read More
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crap my comments just disappeared !!!
I love this! and would love to experience the service!!!I have a similar suggestion to RuthRoland. Here is my suggestion:
The second sentence.
Infusing (my gifts of) energy work with my hair and scalp treatment services it’s called the OH MY GODDESS Experience.(like leading into excitement!)
And in the…Read More
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Here is a Core Value video I shot. I thought I could edit in YouTube, so it starts a couple of seconds in. I’m Live/In-Person, so I’m better when I have an actual body in front of me. I think this is a nice start.
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Per our Zoom conversation today on CPC, I got one of thousand standard pitch messages on LinkedIn, so I had fun, and sent this message. I don’t expect much of an answer, if any, but it was fun to do a quick draft and send. Hi xxxx, since we haven’t met before, and I want to learn more about you. I was wondering if you might answer a question or…Read More
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Hey everyone, I am not going to make it today. Surprise work meeting! Arggggg.
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@ruthviolincox-net fuck I did it again. OMG I deleted your comment when I wanted to reply. Yes, this is much better AND the website is working. Good job on revisions!
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Blog post with my core values. Still struggling with the title, and not proud of the writing. Next up: FB Lives and YouTube videos, maybe something on IG…
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@ruthviolincox-net Hey Ruth! Good job taking action! I can’t seem to get to your core values. I don’t see them in the blog post itself (which would give this post more substance and importance and relevance). When I click on the hyper link “Baton Rouge Conservancy” it goes to a page not secure page and blocks your website. Might need to check on…Read More
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Hmm. I can’t get the error message you’re getting. Are you sure you’re going to Baton Rouge Conservatory and not Baton Rouge Conservancy? I do have a secure page: https://batonrougemusiclessons.com
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The term “core values” seems gimmicky to me. I was trying to say them without using that label. I don’t know how others see it. To me it screams “sales.” But you’re right, the post as is doesn’t seem substantial. My intention is to reassure folks who were nervous, which is important and relevant if I can manage it. Do you think calling out and…Read More
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you switch between “we” and “I”. Just wanted to make sure it was intentional.