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Brenda Uekert

• 2 years ago

I’m playing catch up. Here’s my purpose, vision, and mission. Feedback is most welcome.

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- Brenda Uekert
  2 years ago
  
  Tagging @amymshannonhernandez-com
- AmyHager
  2 years ago
  
  Adding Early and Mid Career Women makes it clearer. Right now, I can’t think of 1 single person who I know who needs your help. I want to read this and see the face of 1 person I know (or see my own face)
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years ago
    
    Are you supposed to see that person in the purpose and vision? In the qualifications? Yes, I watched the videos. Where am I disconnecting?
- AmyHager
  2 years ago
  
  Are you clients using the word “safe haven”?
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years ago
    
    No. My first draft I had ‘escape from difficult circumstances.’ I’ve worked in the areas of domestic violence and elder abuse and have seen how the lack of money – or handing over money decisions to someone else – traps women in lousy relationships. Trying to capture that sense.
Brenda Uekert

• 2 years ago

Hello! I just joined and am introducing myself. I’m a Sociologist, Financial Coach, founder of the Gutsy Women Finances community, and full-time RVer. I travel the USA with my 3 cats. I’m looking forward to getting my messaging down so that it draws in my target audience. Glad to be here and looking forward to meeting you.

Here’s my Linktree:…Read More

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- AmyHager
  2 years ago
  
  I love that you are wasting NO TIME and jumping right in!
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years ago
    
    Yep, precrastinator!
- Dr. Judy Osterhage
  2 years ago
  
  Welcome aboard!
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years ago
    
    Thanks!
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• 2 years ago
JulianneMiller, AFC®

• 2 years ago

I need a little help with some brainstorming please. My clients are often busy and distracted with everyday life that they don’t focus on what is most important to them or aren’t focused on their dreams and goals. I haven’t found a shorter marketing phrase that works for me. Any ideas?

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- Shannon
  2 years ago
  
  Hi Julianne. Remember that people buy with emotions. “focus on dreams/goals” isn’t gonna sell, or at least be painfully hard to sell. So, what do THEY WANT more than anything else?
  - JulianneMiller, AFC®
    2 years ago
    
    Thank you let me mull this over and put some emotion to what they’re thinking and wanting when they come. I know they want calm, they want peace, they want someone to listen and “hear” them. They want direction, organization, professionalism, resources. Just brainstorming. I’ll reflect on some of this. Get out the juicy burger again 🙂
Emily Gowen, Accredited Financial Coach

• 2 years, 1 month ago

FEEDBACK WELCOME! I finally caught up on this week’s training and drafted my landing page for financial coaching for couples- I would love any and all thoughts you have about how I could make it better! ESPECIALLY the name of the program… could be more exciting/describe results. pdxmoneycoaching.com/3month-program-self-employed-couples

If it’s…Read More

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- JulianneMiller, AFC®
  2 years ago
  
  Oh wow! I just landed on calm and confident for a three-week short program! Maybe we talked about it and it stayed with me?! I’m still tossing it around. But I don’t usually work with couples so different target lol
- Shannon
  2 years ago
  
  Hey Emily! So this is a really good start. And a landing page is much different than a sales page for a program – so I’d say you have about 2/3 of the stuff here needed. Do you have a transformation statement for this offer? We’d want to center the entire program around it! Also, I know you are thinking about the VIP Vacation – I think it would…Read More
  - Emily Gowen, Accredited Financial Coach
    2 years ago
    
    Thanks Shannon! Since I stated my niche, I really listened in and decided to change it to just service-based business owners who weren’t taught how to be ‘good with money.’ I’m happy to help them and their partners, but when I started making my marketing plan for a niche focused on couples work, I just wasn’t as excited about it!
    
    I don’t even…Read More
- JoelElfman
  2 years ago
  
  Hi Emily, This is really good. 2 quick notes. How long is a session? I don’t think it said, but I could have missed it. The other thing was “-Confidently manage your money together so you can enjoy spending now, save more than ever before, fix your cash flow and feel financial peace of mind.” I don’t think the top item if I’m struggling would be…Read More
DanielaBorgialli

• 2 years, 1 month ago

FaceBook Event:
https://fb.me/e/3IqPmdbGa

thank you!

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KerstinPeters

• 2 years, 1 month ago

Here is the link to my newsletter: https://mailchi.mp/43de4a4f2a2a/german-news-5252496?e=87357eb8af

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NicholeMyles

• 2 years, 1 month ago

Here’s the link to my coaching page: https://www.mylestogo.net/coaching
Thanks for all the help and feedback today – much appreciated!

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- JoelElfman
  2 years ago
  
  Nichole, this is really good. Most of the comments are about color or fonts.:
  1- Gold on white is sometimes hard to read, especially w/ a cursive script. With this particular font, both the opening “N”, and later the opening “I” in a later testimonial almost blend a bit w/ the italics designating it as a testimonial.
  
  2- “Until I discovere…Read More
SaraFins

• 2 years, 1 month ago

As requested, the URL for my sales page is: http://www.sarafins.com/bookkeeping
🙂

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KerstinPeters

• 2 years, 1 month ago

I had mentioned in one of the sessions that I was featured in a new LEVANTA online magazine. I am excited to share the link with you: https://issuu.com/design.your.plate.

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- AmyHager
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  whooo hoo!!
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