Hey Dan! Because your brand is BADASSITY I was expecting some big bold language in the copy that really stood out. I personally got distracted by the taps in the heading that made me wanted to click away from the lead magnet. I would remove them for your lead magnet. I would break the initial messaging up to something like this: Calling All Bad…Read More

What if you shortened the headline from “Hello, coaches and transformational leaders.
Are your personal brand images commanding attention, building connection, and winning you new clients?” to:

Your coaching can transform lives.
But are your personal brand images commanding attention and building connection to win you new clients?

the first…Read More

@danbadassity-com I like this version so much better than the first. The way you added your color to each slide gave it more visual appeal for me (I’m a visual content person). I am LOVING the way that you broke down the assessment into the colored boxes. It makes it hard to miss. ANd the Name It – Frame It- Play It- slide feels much more on brand…Read More

When I click your download link it takes me to the success page

Hi @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com I think this email is fine. I love getting these types of emails because oftentimes I click on something and get distracted and forget about it. I’m not sure what your content personality is but if it’s video or audio i think adding a personal video answering common FAQs (this will save the time of…Read More

I always wondered how to send these emails. Thanks for sharing, email looks good!

WHOA! I jsut went thru your content AND I WAS EXCITED to get my list — this is OUTSTANDING

I would love to see/hear how you planned/plan your content for your newsletter – Im on you list 🙂

Good flow! Congrats on getting this done. You knocked it out of the park!

Nice assessment, Reejade! Really thorough and organized in easy-to-understand chunks. I had two thoughts:
Your title – Without context, I didn’t know what kind of membership you were talking about until you introduced yourself as someone who’s experienced in online communities. Feels to me like the title needs some kind of qualifier, like…Read More

I just downloaded this and it looks lovely and is very detailed. Like what Dan said, I didn’t realise it was memberships for communities, and that would have pulled me in faster because I’m looking to increase the membership in my community. So adding that clarity to the title might be helpful. Just a technical note, I am receiving the emails…Read More

I tool have been thinking (and writing on this one) happy to discuss – I know what my baselines are and I see them in notebooks going back for YEARS so I just want to get them down and done – happy to discuss tomorrow

Great ask! And, it is such a good session. Good replay to dive into

Which replay is margarita’s and mission statements class? What month can I find it in?

My understanding Jaini is that you can post your drafts here and we all (including Amy and Shannon when they can) give feedback/comments.

Hi, Blair! I like the flow of your piece very much, especially how you note the FEELING of helplessness when your pet is afraid.
The flow is great, but feels like it could be tightened up a bit. (perhaps consolidate the What I discovered and what I figured out sections?
Great work!

This might be giving away a little too much. Is there anything you feel you can pull back on in V2 that will give them clarity that they need your help?

One suggestion is to replace this phrase: So I created a technique that anyone can quickly
With: I teach pet parents (or owners – how ever they are identifying when you speak to them) how to…Read More