Community Forum – Content Personality Club

Lisa Johns

• 6 months, 3 weeks ago

Hi all – new to the group and excited to be here. I am a bookkeeper who loves to educate clients on what they can learn from their numbers to help grow their businesses.

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Jaini Shah

• 6 months, 3 weeks ago

I am creating a landing page for an online masterclass that I am hosting on 29 July 2024. Below is the text for the landing page (or you can have a look at the landing page here: https://wildbutterfly.myflodesk.com/nkh6awy5pc). Would love your thoughts everyone in the community and @amymshannonhernandez-com and @clientsmshannonhernandez-com on…Read More

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- AmyHager
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Did you watch the landing page training? It doesn’t seem so, my suggestion is to go back to it and watch it.
  Your email is more aligned VS your landing page.
  - Jaini Shah
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks! Which month is the landing page training? I’ll add that to the resources I need to watch.
    - AmyHager
      6 months, 3 weeks ago
      
      September 2022: Landing Page Copy
      
      Jaini Shah
      6 months, 3 weeks ago
      
      Thanks will watch this!
Jaini Shah

• 6 months, 3 weeks ago

Hi Guys! Here’s my first email draft since Wednesday’s call. I’d love if you could have a read and let me now, does this make you want to sign up for a free discovery call?

Subject Line: Tell Your Mind Better Things
Preview: You can cheat your mind so that you can have a better experience.

It was 11.30pm, there’s a massive elephant 5 meters…Read More

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- AmyHager
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Flip the order of this: I definitely did start to pray on repeat. But before that, I felt helpless, powerless, and that anything could happen. And my husband was right next to me calm as a cucumber. I was wondering, what’s wrong with me, why am I freaking out? What am I not understanding?
  
  I felt helpless and powerless that anything could happen i…Read More
  - Jaini Shah
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks!
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• 7 months ago

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RuthieSterrett

• 7 months ago

Would love feedback on this email I wrote after our session today!

Subject: It’s not about the stuff
Preview: What I’ve learned as a self taught marketer (a series)

Hey NAME,

Several years ago, as a new mom learning to juggle a new career and a 1 year old, I found out my job was being eliminated. One of the biggest stressors in lif…Read More

lead magnet

free workshop I am promoting this month

https://www.theconsistencycorner.com/holiday-marketing-strategy

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- AmyHager
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I like this… but one tiny change. You need to talk emotion… not brain. Change this line: I landed a job in corporate retail for a running company, but immediately knew I didn’t fit in.
  
  I landed a job in corporate retail for a running company, but immediately felt that I didn’t fit in.
- Jaini Shah
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Nice one! Like Amy mentioned, more emotion would be great. Is there a part of the story where you made a sale to the mum who wants to run 5k? So as to share the story and then the point comes after in brief? Just a suggestion.
AmyHager

• 7 months ago

For our event at the end of the month… copy this please: Register for free using code CPLAB97 at this link here:

[Content Personality Lab #2] Payment

You do no have the zoom details yet and need to do that.

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- Sam Brabender
  7 months ago
  
  link not working for me
  - AmyHager
    7 months ago
    
    can you share a screenshot?
    - Sam Brabender
      7 months ago
      
      when i click on it above , it does not go anywhere. However link given in the session works. Can yo remind me where I find the template/guide that was shown today?
      
      AmyHager
      7 months ago
      
      So, you have what you need to get registered?
      
      Sam Brabender
      7 months ago
      
      yes thanks
      
      AmyHager
      7 months ago
      
      Replay and notes will be up under the course tomorrow.
Dan Lewis

• 7 months ago

Next iteration lead (conversion) magnet. Looking for feedback on messaging and appeal.

https://www.badassity.com/s/Visual-Charisma-for-Coaches-compressed.pdf

Here’s the download landing page. Still working long getting the form working properly. Also looking for feedback on messaging.

https://www.badassity.com/visual-charisma

Thanks!

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- ReeJade
  7 months ago
  
  Hey Dan! Because your brand is BADASSITY I was expecting some big bold language in the copy that really stood out. I personally got distracted by the taps in the heading that made me wanted to click away from the lead magnet. I would remove them for your lead magnet. I would break the initial messaging up to something like this: Calling All Bad…Read More
  - Dan Lewis
    7 months ago
    
    Thanks for your feedback, Reejade!
    - ReeJade
      6 months, 4 weeks ago
      
      of course! happy to help
- RuthieSterrett
  7 months ago
  
  What if you shortened the headline from “Hello, coaches and transformational leaders.
  Are your personal brand images commanding attention, building connection, and winning you new clients?” to:
  
  Your coaching can transform lives.
  But are your personal brand images commanding attention and building connection to win you new clients?
  
  the first…Read More
  - Dan Lewis
    7 months ago
    
    Thanks, Ruthie! Your version is much stronger.
- CarrieWulf
  7 months ago
  
  @danbadassity-com I like this version so much better than the first. The way you added your color to each slide gave it more visual appeal for me (I’m a visual content person). I am LOVING the way that you broke down the assessment into the colored boxes. It makes it hard to miss. ANd the Name It – Frame It- Play It- slide feels much more on brand…Read More
  - Dan Lewis
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks, Carrie! Really helpful!
- CarrieWulf
  7 months ago
  
  When I click your download link it takes me to the success page
  - Dan Lewis
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Oops! Thanks for catching! I
CarrieWulf

• 7 months ago

Context: I want to personally send a message to the people who clicked the workshop link but did not register. This email is a personal email sent to them.

Subject Line: Checking in with you

Copy:
Hey {!firstname_fix},

I noticed you clicked on the link for my SOP Summer School: High-Touch Client Onboarding with Low-Touch Effort workshop…Read More

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- ReeJade
  7 months ago
  
  Hi @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com I think this email is fine. I love getting these types of emails because oftentimes I click on something and get distracted and forget about it. I’m not sure what your content personality is but if it’s video or audio i think adding a personal video answering common FAQs (this will save the time of…Read More
- Jaini Shah
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  I always wondered how to send these emails. Thanks for sharing, email looks good!
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• 7 months ago

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CarrieWulf

• 7 months, 1 week ago

@mariaaskmaria-tech Maria, without sounding weird…can I borrow you? I need tech help and am happy to schedule a session with you. I am trying to integrate a plugin into my website so I can accept Stripe payments for my workshop registration and things are not playing nice in the sandbox. I’m about to start day drinkin lol.

For context -…Read More
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