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Possible hooks:
*3 reasons you’re losing out on dances at festivals
* why your embrace could be costing you dances
*why you feel uncomfortable in your embraces
*want to improve your social dance connection and get more dances?
*from chaos to clarity in your embrace
*from ho-hum to orgasmic in your social dancing
*Stop getting stepped on(do any of these feel possible????)
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![Profile picture of DanielaBorgialli]()
got it – thank you
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This is my favorite: *want to improve your social dance connection and get more dances? You are focusing on those who already dance, right?
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![Profile picture of DanielaBorgialli]()
great – thank you and yes
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![Profile picture of JennyLocklin]()
Hi Daniela, I’m new so take my comments w/ a grain of salt. Personally, I don’t know what embrace means in that context. I definitely know what the last entry means…”Stop getting stepped on!” I don’t know what social dances mean? I’m guessing that your target audience knows exactly what that means? Does that mean going to dance clubs and getting someone to dance w/ you?I see you mentioned festivals but I don’t know what type of festivals. Again, I’m guessing your target audience definitely knows what type of festival. I’m also wondering, is it how to be a better dancer or how to get picked to dance w/ someone else?
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![Profile picture of DanielaBorgialli]()
thank you
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I like all of these, I would change “want to improve…” to “how to improve…”