I love it – quick, powerful and needed. I read and process VERY quickly so it was ok for me… but I can see how it might be “too fast” for others to keep up with.

Malinda, this is really good. Possible small considerations for tweaking. I’m with Amy H on the timing of the Breaking Glass. Although I might go further, and right after you shatter the glass, I would consider changing the language to 40% of trafficking is Male. You’ve shattered the glass for the reveal, For me, the extra panel to get “Male” did not build extra tension. I would just go right upfront w/ boys are 40%. And in the last panel, I would consider a cone of light coming down from the lamp you just drew. You got the lamp, might as well turn it on, to emphasize your point. I wonder if you could build the lamp early, and maybe use it to illuminate each fact. For me, I’m closer to Amy F-Y on the speed. I felt a mismatch in the auditory delivery vs. the speed of the writing & drawing. My brain was ahead of the writing or drawing that was still trying to finish. Just shows you, that everyone is different.

Nice multimedia piece, Malida! What if you start with”Myth: Sex trafficking is a girls……” then “Fact: it’s a boys ,…” because the word ‘Myth’ might keep me reading, whereas I may not otherwise ( I already know trafficking is a girl issue). Also the end, how about a quick phrase about what your #film is raising $$ for (a doc on ….. X% goes to a relief fund…. ). And/or can you imbed your project link so a reader who is now interested can click on the screen vs. copy/paste to learn more?

Great job, loved this and very emotive and powerful!