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Hi! @amymshannonhernandez-com I want to work on my welcome sequence for my email list and also my email sequence for my graduate clients. What’s the best way to seek support for working on this? Do I post here the actual content of the emails or how do I go about it?
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Jaini! you are already an amazing community member. Thanks for bringing your question here.
Once you watch the email nurture sequence replay from May – please post here. Your fellow Club members are here to ask you questions to help you get clearer. Shannon and me will be here to help you get clearer as well. But, you need to watch the replay…Read More -
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Thanks Whitney and Amy! I’ve found the May reply link and put it in my calendar to watch!
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Okay, I’ve finally completed a draft of my lead magnet! I’m attaching a pdf mock-up, because it’s a visual guide and I wanted to indicate the relationship of copy and visual elements. It is a ROUGH mock-up. I’m interested in how the visual guide strikes you. Reactions to the messaging. Do you find it useful? Please be specific about the things…Read More
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Love the visual flow of this!
On the cover, aer YOU ideal clients saying these words? Elevate your online authority, attract
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OMG, Dan!! Your portraits speak for themselves!! When you are in Seattle, let’s schedule a shoot!!
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Thanks, Thia!
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Here is my draft. I decided to start over because I want to get my Calm & Pets: Storm and Fireworks program out for 4th of July /summer. Some of this was bolded and I can’t figure out how to make it bold here.
I’d love feedback. It may be too long. Thanks!
Hook: Is your pet afraid of storms or fireworks?
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Hi, Blair! I like the flow of your piece very much, especially how you note the FEELING of helplessness when your pet is afraid.
The flow is great, but feels like it could be tightened up a bit. (perhaps consolidate the What I discovered and what I figured out sections?
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Thanks Dan for your feedback!
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This might be giving away a little too much. Is there anything you feel you can pull back on in V2 that will give them clarity that they need your help?
One suggestion is to replace this phrase: So I created a technique that anyone can quickly
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Thanks, I am cutting a lot and changing that language. Good idea!
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Hi Everyone! I’m Jaini, just joined the club. Excited to be here and really get clear on my messaging and start taking action on all the things I’ve started but not finished. And this time with the best messaging possible 😊😊
I’m a health enthusiast and became a food relationship coach and Rapid Transformational Therapist after going through my…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Hi, Jaini! Welcome! Thanks for sharing your story and your interests!
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Thanks Dan! Looking forward to connecting!
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Share your content! If you have used your content on your social media, share it so we can see and support you! ❤️
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Where can I find last Wednesday’s CPC recording and, more importantly, the What’s New master template that was presented? Thank you
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Always go to the month you are looking for and the recordings will be there, usually within 24-48 hrs after the session. https://contentpersonalityclub.com/courses/june-2024/
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Thank you @amymshannonhernandez-com. Where do I get google doc I can copy from that day. I only see pdf there, thanks.
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google doc is in the starter kit
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Finally!!! Here’s my lead magnet, with 4 follow-up emails, and the offer. I’m nervous, after lots of work, and any feedback would be gold.
http://www.mysticpowersreview.comAlso, I am thinking of renaming it into Mystic Quiz. It’s more direct, more playful, and more clear. Mystic Powers Review is a mouthful, and I think it will have a harder time…Read More
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@samirselmanovicnycgmail-com hello! I will be diving deep into this with you once you get onboarded in our other program – but for now, I’m thinking the quiz needs to be: Modern Mystic Quiz. I like this a lot – and it’s better than “review”. Thoughts?
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Love it! Also, I was thinking Mystic Leadership Quiz. The one you suggest is for more broad audience, more playful. While MLQ would identify who is this for in terms of my level 5 client, but not that playful and energizing like MMQ.
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Oooh, I like the dynamic justaposition of Modern Mystic!
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Hello! Here is my first stab at a ‘what’s new’ email. My CTA is to download my guide. I’d love any feedback. Is it clear? Compelling? Make sense? Thanks!
Email 1:
Is the fact that you feel like you aren’t good with numbers holding you back from getting your business finances in order?If so, here is what you can do about it:
I’m see…Read More
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Not a numbers person can be one of the answers on your new quiz lead magnet.
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How can you touch more into the emotion? This line could be different: This holds them back from growing the revenue in their business and keeps their stress levels high.
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My understanding Jaini is that you can post your drafts here and we all (including Amy and Shannon when they can) give feedback/comments.